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  • Evelyn replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago

    So I wrote a poem last night, and I was hoping for some feedback about it. I write a lot of poetry late at night when I have trouble falling asleep, and lately I’ve been messing around with a sweet and simple feel portraying things a young child would go through or do throughout their day.

     

    I like to sing to my Grandma,

    She likes to hear my tune,

    I beat my can for the drum,

    And stomp through the room.

     

    I sing it loud,

    I sing it dancing,

    I sing it proud,

    I sing it prancing,

     

    When the parade is finely over,

    She says that I’m the best,

    And gives me cake or cookies

    For while I take my rest.

     

    @consciousdreamer @j-a-penrose  @cassie-hartfinh  @esjohnson @steward-of-the-pen

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