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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Grammar, Punctuation, Passive Voice etc | Tips and Tricks in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Haha, same here! I haven’t gotten it wrong since. 😀
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Coggleton replied to the topic A General Apology in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
The guilds have certainly been helpful! As it happens, I’ve been involved in a forum-based roleplaying group before, and here’s some thoughts from that I have.
– It seems like there’s no subforum/thread dedicated for General Use/General Conversation, so something like that would be useful.
– While I think the maintained activity is…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic A General Apology in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose I just assumed you were college-aged so I was only a few years off. 😉
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic Parimi Alca Creed in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose @evelyn @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @esjohnson @ariella-newheart @steward-of-the-pen Sorry I haven’t been active in the forums much lately, everyone. I’m outta school now, trying to think where to get a full-time job, praying for peace in my family, and trying to grow in my faith as well. Life hits hard. Y’know. But I thought I should at…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic A General Apology in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose Also, another little trick of the trade, for planning a meeting with people all over the world (because I have to do this every three weeks 😛 ) using a Doodle poll to figure out what time would be best, is super helpful.
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Evelyn replied to the topic A General Apology in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose Hey you’ve been doing a great job! And personally I don’t think it’s your job to hold all our hands. 😉
A lot of it is on us guildlings for expecting so much from you. I realized the other day that I should stop complaining and be the difference I was looking for. 😛
All your ideas sound cool to me! One thing, hangouts video is…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Grammar, Punctuation, Passive Voice etc | Tips and Tricks in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose Just wanted to pop back in here and tell you how much your simple little affect v. effect has helped me!
You can not believe how many times I have used it! Thank you so much!! 😀 😀 😀
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Ah!! I see! 😀 Very cute. I like your updated photo infinitely more though 😉
Oh, milady… you may keep it as long as the sun shines in our bright sky….
*courtesies when exiting*
Yes, yes, and yes. 🙂 IKR, so awesome!!! I was somewhat surprised that our own dear @j-a-penrose did not announce this,…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen started the topic Anyone else doing Theme Mastery? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Hey Parimis!
So, I made the last minute decision to sign up for Theme Mastery the night enrollment closed, and so far it has been AMAZING! I was wondering if any of you enrolled too, and if so, how would you like to start a discussion thread about it? I thought it might be fun and helpful to discuss things as we go along and share how we’re…[Read more]
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Julia replied to the topic Lesson 26 : Compare and Contrast in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
@sarah-vdh @anne_the_noob14 Thank you! 😃
@j-a-penrose I’ll remember that. 😉 Thanks for the feedback!
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi all!!
I’m not sure if you’ve seen this…
BUT WE WERE GIVEN AN HONORABLE MENTION IN THIS WAR!!!
See https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cELNYNDhdM5o1DcXvFwxkTE29p7MnZtcRzRobNuExzY/edit#
I found that Daeus’s feedback was super helpful – so please read it! 🙂
Anyway, thanks especially to ESJohnson (for doing most of the writing) and Darth…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Holiday Announcement in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose Thank you, guildmadam! Merry Christmas to all!
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anne_the_noob14 replied to the topic Holiday Announcement in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose Okies! Thank you! 😀 *sends my usual virtual hug*
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Evelyn replied to the topic Holiday Announcement in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose Thank you for all your work, Jess!
I really appreciate it! Get yourself some chai tea and enjoy your break! 😀
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ESJohnson replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Also, I’m thinking what if Aleksander’s Son attacks before he has a chance to march out? That means the spirits lied and he now has to make a choice for or against them. Any thoughts?
(And @coggleton , I was going for that David/Absalom vibe…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle posted an update 7 years, 6 months ago
So I’ve been working on a story recently, and I was wondering what you guys think of this part…
Cornelius had been walking for a while now and thirst threatened to get the best of him. He stooped beside the stream and cupped some water into his hands to drink.
Dang. This water tastes weird. Not bad, but weird.
Smacking his lips, he started…[Read more]
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Ooh, intriguing! 🙂
Does it seem more female or male? Hmm… It feels like it could go either way… it doesn’t feel like one or the other yet, reading through.
Once you pick one gender though, you probably will want to add a quick description in this clip to signify that. -
Oh ho, this seems good *rubs hands together in anticipation*
My mind automatically thought the sprite was male. I could visualize it being all dramatic: ‘Who DARES to summon /The Great Water Sprite/!?’ etc., etc.
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I don’t think it necessarily seems more male or female. Make it a dude though, I feel like all the sprites I read of in stories are girls =P
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@evelyn True.
@obrian-of-the-surface-world Maybe I should paste in the rest of the story. (Below) Me and my friends took turns adding a sentence or two to the starting sentence to write the first couple pages, down to where he knocks himself out, and then I write the rest. It’s kinda a mess right now, and I’m still working on editing it, but maybe…[Read more]-
I’m sorry, lol. I didn’t realize I made so many typing errors!
” he knocks himself out, and then I WROTE the rest.”
“The wad OF money appeared in…”
I think that’s all the ones, lol. I’m not usually this messy!
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Wow. That is hard to determine where any cues might come from because it shifts too many story threads into random directions. Not sure still if I can get a gender decision on the brief part where the Water Sprite shows up. Do you have a backstory in mind for the Water Sprite? That might give you a better idea of which traits might lend…[Read more]
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@anne_the_noob14 No problem! 🙂
By the way, next time it might be easier to start a thread in the Parimi Alca writing discussion section… it’s easier to read and respond to long messages that way. 🙂-
@evelyn Ah, you’re right! Lol I didn’t think of that soon enough 😀
@obrian-of-the-surface-world Right. I haven’t yet thought up a backstory for the Sprite yet. And yes! It does help 🙂 Thanks!
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@anne_the_noob14 I think that this seemed more like a girl. If you want it to be more masculine, though, maybe mention a deep/male voice or something? (I’m sorry it’s taken me forever to see this 😛 I got super behind on emails!)
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*thumbs up* It’s ok, lol. Holidays are always busy for everybody 😛
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Evelyn posted a new activity comment 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus-lamb @j-a-penrose Thank you guys so much! 🙂
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Daeus Lamb posted a new activity comment 7 years, 6 months ago
Sorry this happened. Not sure how it happened… I can put her in a guild right away. @j-a-penrose, do you have room?
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Evelyn posted a new activity comment 7 years, 6 months ago
@j-a-penrose @daeus-lamb
So… I’m a bit worried. My friend hasn’t gotten in a guild yet. I just assumed she wasn’t able to get into Parimi Alca because of a waiting list and I was fine with that, but recently I noticed some people who only joined S.E. in the past couple weeks, got into a guild… or a temporarily guild, while she still hasn’t.…[Read more]-
Sorry this happened. Not sure how it happened… I can put her in a guild right away. @j-a-penrose, do you have room?
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Agh no! So sorry that this happened @evelyn. D: And yes, @daeus-lamb, I do have room for her. *nods* I assume some of this got muddled up while people were away and general chaos. Sorry again!
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@evelyn Got her set up. 🙂
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
OK – that sounds great! Just letting you know that I’ll be here tomorrow as well, but can’t make it on Sunday. 🙂
And feel free to tag me if you need another’s input.
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