J.A.Penrose

@jane-maree Thanks Jane! (As I said, I was meant to be back, but that didn’t happen apparently)

@evelyn Very nice!

Maybe change ‘tune’ to ‘death toll’ or something of the sort?

@steward-of-the-pen Yasss, so much brilliance.

Cool! That’s all good then! *nodnod*

@coggleton

Ahhhh, so, this lesson was for the future plot twists, yeah. BUT YAY. As it was, you did this lesson here instead. xD

@steward-of-the-pen … *gestures around* Well, last time, Jane was chained up and threatened with a dragon…

@coggleton Nice!

Question: is he going to drown in a storm again? (if so, yay!) Or, is this just hinting at backstory?

I really liked the snippet though, and it sounds very cool. *nodnod*

Good job guys! (also, you have to blow me away next guild war cos apparently I’m judging)

Hi Parimis!

I’ve returned, and thanks for being good for a week! (And awww, you’re all so nice! I had meant that I didn’t want you to all try and rebel against me and move permanently to Jane’s guild.)

And thanks again! @jane-maree

@wishingwell13
@cassie-hartfinh
@esjohnson
@coggleton
@julia
@evelyn
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly
@ariella-newheart
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*guildmaster hurries in late* WELCOME!!!!! @taylorclogston

And hehehe… I have no clue. *shall go and check it out cos why does everything happen whenever I’m away?*

Also… ACK YAS A FELLOW GAME PLAYER. All of the board games and card games listed: check. Pokemon crystal: check. (Admittedly, I would have put the next generation above that one,…[Read more]

OKAY GUYS! Once it is Monday, stop writing, and submit your words on this thread. If you’ve edited, submit however many words you got, then say that that was editing. Good job guys!

I wrote 7284

I edited…[Read more]

@steward-of-the-pen Haha, that’s fine!

@cassie-hartfinh Woot! Go you!

Yeup. You can foreshadow a plot twist at any point. The main thing is to make sure that it gives the readers a chance to know that something could happen to do with that, and, more importantly, won’t make them feel ripped off.

SPOILERS FOR WINGFEATHER SAGA BELOW

We don’t find out about the Song of the Stones until part way through the second…[Read more]

@julia Ooooh, nice! I like how from there you could quickly go onto another topic, but later that little skill could be invaluable. *nodnod*

@julia Ooooh, nice! I like how from there you could quickly go onto another topic, but later that little skill could be invaluable. *nodnod*

@steward-of-the-pen Plotting is anything pre-writing. If you’ve been writing new scenes then that is writing.

We’re subtracting 500 because a few people reckon that it is easier to edit what’s already been written opposed to coming up with something new.

Again guys, appologies, I’m making a list of all of these things that we need to sort…[Read more]

@cassie-hartfinh
@steward-of-the-pen
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly
@julia
@writercatherine
@emily-d

KEEP IT UP GUYS!

Julia: No, they don’t count. D: Also, I’m going to have to check, because I gave you an answer off how I tend to do a word war, not specifically how this one is running… *shall work this out* *after a furious debate with the…[Read more]

@evelyn I am here purely to clarify that Parimi Alca is the best guild. By far. *nods wisely*

@eden-anderson We’re currently short on guildmasters, but there will be room with the Parimis soon (and a few other guilds) and we can probably arrange for you to be in a guild fairly shortly. And yeah, I’ll try and bring up the option of sorting…[Read more]

@sarah-vdh Oooh, yes, enjoy!

@steward-of-the-pen (Thanks, I didn’t see it actually)

@daeus-lamb Ah. Cool. *notes to keep this in mind*