Faith Blum

@jane-maree @faith_blum thanks!

@jane-maree

Thank you for taking the time to read it! Yes, I definitely need to work on passive voice…I’m glad you liked it.

@faith_blum

Thank you for your comments! I sort of wrote it in one writing, so I could also take the time to review it.

I hope that I can post other short stories as they come by here. And thanks once again!

hehe @jane-maree

I agree with @faith_blum though joe always teased her, and stuff, he was pretty sweet with her, specially on the Angle’s Secret (*CRYING OVER SAMUEL* 🙁 :”””'(((((( ), and when he goes off too collage, or like what he says to her right before she leaves to Europe.. or on the book called the Abandon mine, at the very end when…[Read more]

Instant crowd! Don’t worry, I won’t do this too often, I…[Read more]

Sorry for tagging you all again, but it’s been brought to my attention by a lovely staff member that I got my head muddled around and I’ve accidentally gotten my passive voice mixed into a bit of showing vs telling in this post.

So, to correct any confusion: “I saw/felt/heard” is NOT passive voice. It’s telling.

Also: “My pulse was roaring in…[Read more]

@parker Thanks!

@faith_blum

Good job with your section! You did a great job with the active voice. 🙂

The hem of my dress rustled in the stems of grass as I stepped from the last stair. With so much fabric swathed around my legs, fitting into the coach might be a harder task than it ought. I cleared my throat to dismiss the faint bubble of a laugh that tried to well up.

Laughing on the way to my father’s funeral would not give the right i…[Read more]

Thank you @faith_blum ! =D i also got way over my max of words in one sitting. I wrote 1,947 words! 😀 Now just to do all the editing.. XD

@jane-maree and @faith_blum

YESSSSSS I DIDD!!!!!! *RUNS AROUND HAPPY AND VERY HYPER*

I finished it at 10:20 last night!

@faith_blum

okay, thank you! 😀

@Faith_blum

I got 754 words written, which is good enough, and i’m in a pretty good spot, i think, almost past where i thought i needed to be. Thank you! And now that i have this, i can hopefully be able to write 1 hundred, or 2 hundred more words tonight.

=)

@faith_blum

well i’m not sure if i’llbe able to write that whole entire.. time.. 0_0 i’ve never written for that long. Also what i write will go slow, because the girl is sharing the gospel with her, so i have to find all the refrences to the verses she mentions. But hopefully  i can get at least 700 words or so.

Thanks for doing this with me! =)

@faith_blum

I don’t know.. XD Maybe just all day, i’ll be writing during my little brother’s nap time, so like 2-4ish, centrel time.

@jane-maree Thanks! I probably need about 1,000 today, and 1,000 tomorrow.. 0_0

@faith_blum yes that would be awesome! 😀

@faith_blum, I noticed that you’re in the Young Writers Guidebook. I think that’s really cool.

@faith_blum

Great job! I really love your style, honestly. It has a very historical fiction feel, but it’s also engaging.

@parker

You’re welcome! 😛 Anytime.

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I toss up between 3rd and 1st too, though I normally lean toward 1st person because it’s simply easier to get the character voice in, and I enjoy it more. But as I…[Read more]

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Avensbeck won the championship this time around! *tosses confetti over…[Read more]

@jane-maree Thanks! I can’t decide if I like third person or first person better :-/ It usually depends on what mood I’m in 😉

@faith_blum *Thumbs up* 🙂