Erynne

“The fire is still smoking. Kallun, you want to get the fish?” Julian asked, “K’Nika and I can go find more onions.”

@allertingthbs

Yeah, I have a lot of alcoholism in my family, so I know how they act, but I don’t know how they feel or what they think.

I just have one quick scene that I need this information for. It can be aggravating how much research goes into a few words XD

@the-inkspiller

I actually knew some of that! I was in love with horses for a…[Read more]

@allertingthbs

That helps a lot!!! Thank you so much!

“Much better,” Julian said stretching, “Do we have any breakfast?”

Julian laughed and sat up. “Finn here is just as… shocked as I was to find out you to are more than friends. Also, please just throw a rock at his head or something to wake him up. Don’t be all disgusting about it.”

@the-inkspiller

Woah, sorry, I didn’t mean to get super personal….

I, uh, yeah, either way that was incredibly helpful!! Thank you so much!

Is there like a series of events that happen during the process of getting drunk? (headaches, sweating, etc.)

“WHAT?” Finn gasped. “You, you, what?”

Julian rolled over having been awake for a while but not saying anything, “happens to the best of us,” he said to Finn.

Ellie was trying to hide a giggle and Lacey was doing her best not to doze off again.

*Stumbles in wondering if this thread was still being used for its original purpose*

*Decides it is*

Um, hi… I was, sorta wondering if anyone knows what it feels like being, uh, drunk? 😂

I need to know for one of the novels I’m working on, but it’s not something I want to look up or ask my family, lol

But if the dagger is coated in poo, then…

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Finn was the next one to wake.

“Well good morning princesses” he said with a smile.

“Julian and Lace aren’t going to get up on their own, are they?” Ellie asked.

“Nope.”

He went over to his sister and nudged her in the head with his foot. She frowned with her eyes shut still.  “Whaaat?” She whined pushing his foot away.

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Ellie got up immediately after Pia.

“Good morning,” She said softly

Everyone else laid on the ground and soon fell asleep. The night came and went and sooner than anyone wanted, the sun began to rise signaling the new day

@noah-cochran

An enemy from her past in a contemporary setting could be interesting

Yeah, I thought so too. I was thinking maybe an ex husband who she thought had died…

I would recommend you think along the lines of: pick a relatively normal activity or hobby, add some interesting conflict to it, and have it connected to both the guy and the…

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@noah-cochran

I love romance subplots in books, but I don’t typically read straight romances. They do interest me enough to think about writing one though.

Gotcha. That’s cool! It’s hard to read straight romances. I enjoy them, but it’s hard to find clean ones.

I like both of those ideas! I was thinking of ways to make it a mystery, but I s…[Read more]

@noah-cochran
Haha, ngl, i totally didn’t see you as a romance guy.

Yes, it is the former. I think It’ll probably be more of a contemporary thing to show the difference in a Christian courtship versus a modern day thing.

I have no plot ideas, just characters and genre.

Thanks for being willing to help!