Emma Walker

Cool. I think I might just create my own and then go from there! Could you maybe summarize what’s happening since I was never a part of this story on the Wingfeather forum so I’ve got absolutely no clue what’s happening?

So our five characters (Lagoron the elf (me), Holly the minstrel (Jasmine), Jason the boy (originally OREO’s, but she’s not h…[Read more]

Hey Denali!! Yep, we’re still very much alive, but I’m not quite sure what happened to Fern… we had one post of hers and one of her Guarded’s (Brook, I think?), and we’ve gotten quite a ways ahead of that. :/

@rose-colored-fancy

Sahar sounds like a more honest version of Quin, here, interestingly enough–feeling useless is the only thing he’s any good at anymore. (for now, that is).

That was actually very beautiful, but sad to read. You know, Sahar should punch Acyn some time…

Good luck with Nano! 🙂

Sahar

The girl was getting heavy. At first she had seemed to listen to me talking, but gradually, she’d grown more and more detatched. Not a good sign.

Acyn had told me that being unconcious was usually worse, so I did everything I could to keep her present. That mostly involved talking. A lot. I was good at that, but gradually my words had lost…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Haha I know right !!

LOL, for some reason the philosophy always gets pulled out with Acyn, Faye, and Chantara (For some reason?? She’s a villain?? Why?)

Thank youu, he is my favourite character. I get excited just thinking about him! One can only hope that Liorah stays out of his life permanently so that she can’t p…

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@this-is-not-an-alien

Good writing! I like this scene. And I was actually just thinking of this song!!! But this is prettier than the version I heard. The Spanish is a good touch.  (I didn’t make a fool of myself and get the language wrong, did I?!)

Why do you cross certain sentences out?

@nobody-in-particular-just-shouting-to-the-void Ehud’s an ENFP-t and Rosario’s an ISTJ-a! I like listening to Like Morning Follows Night by Jeff Williams for them! 🥰

It all starts to fade around them.
Fade into a sky above.
The monster and the webs just start to dissolve.
Everything is getting dim gray…

His
‘Is this all…a dream?’
Ehud landed…[Read more]

He is not an ex Marine. Klein is an active duty Marine Special Operator attached to the Marine Raider Regiment.

Qatar

“Set her on the floor next to the wall over there, please.” said Niarok

Qatar set Yila down as gently as he could on blanket her brother had laid for her on the hard stone floor.

He looked from the haggard face of the brother to the sister’s, flushed with fever, and to her arm, swollen and discolored.

She’s dying.

without another loo…[Read more]

Great!

Yeah that’s an idea. Idk if receiving help is something Locran is fond of though? Sorta doesn’t seem like he’d like that too well…

It could also just be slow forming friendship–like a guy bonding thing–no help involved. Whatever you think would work best!!

@emily-waldorf

Denali, same-o. If you don’t like this, please feel free to change anything.

NOOOO IT WAS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love seeing this side of Qatar! It’s like he’s so kind somewhere deep beneath all the anger and sternness and even he doesn’t realize it but it’s there and auuuugghhhh!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!

Niarok

Niarok paced b…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

As they walked, he found himself eavesdropping on the conversation between the new boy and Acyn. It appeared that new boy had mocked Acyn’s arrogance. And Acyn decided to take offense. Lorcan rolled his eyes. Will children ever learn?
LOLLLLLL!!!!!! THIS IS SO GREAT!!!!!

Aw thank you so much XD that is literally my own inner v…[Read more]

Yeah…I hate to think the kind of mess they’d make together. And all three of them??!!! Yikes.

Yay.

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you!!!! I’m so pleased that you like Quin–I do too. the poor guy just has to get over some things and he’ll be fine. Yeah, a heroic jerk–good description of Qatar. 🙂

Qatar

The man looked at him, boring holes into Qatar’s shoulder until he turned and met his eyes.

The man’s stare seemed to say, “Th…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

I am just figuring out that Niarok’s ‘feral mountain lion’ is Qatar. I am dying over here, girl! This is just getting better. Also, great job writing Qatar.

Lol!!!!!! I thought that would be a good way to describe him after reading your first description, and then it kinda just stuck and now I love it so much!!!! And thank you.…[Read more]

Oh, yay! I’m so thrilled, because I struggle to make real characters, so I’m glad you like him

@emily-waldorf

Aww, I love Quin so much! 🙂 I just adore him, he’s so sweet! I think Qatar has some… issues but I’m sure he’s an overall nice person! (Characters with issues are just the best though!)

Here folks, I thought of something else I wanted Qatar to do… sorry for posting so much.

Don’t worry about it! I love reading your stuff! I’m j…[Read more]

Oooh, I need y’all’s help naming him!

Here are the options: (With meanings because I love some symbolism 🙂 )

Cencio (Victorious)

Ciro (Like the sun)

Fausto (Man of luck)

Fiero (Proud)

I’m currently leaning toward Fausto, but I’m really not sure yet! What do y’all think?

@this-is-not-an-alien

@denali-christianson

And Kongar is very creepy  *

LOL, he really is though!! Talking about that… since everyone is shuffling around characters anyway, I want to take out Kongar and Chantara, (I have them figured out) and put in one of the characters from my upcoming project! (The Edwardian pirate vs. spy thingy one!) He…[Read more]

Thank youuuuuuu! That means so much to me. I was/am super scared I’m going to nail the jerk part and skip the sympathetic part.

NIAROK, GIVE DENALI HER COMPUTER BACK!

Yay! I like Niarok, and I can’t wait to see what a Niarok’s Niarok-ish way is!!!! Also can’t wait to see what you/we come up with for Qatar’s…[Read more]