Emma Walker

Ooooh, if you don’t want to talk about weather, you’re barking up the wrong tree, lol. I love the topic of weather. 🙂 Are your winters damp, as well as being cold? (Damp is the worst in wintertime. Thankfully we don’t have too much of it here. It does get down to -28.89 C/-20 F where I live. Do you get a lot of windchill over there? also, in the…[Read more]

“Like it? I heard siblings can be a pest sometimes,” Acyn smiled, rather wryly.

like it… a year ago Quin would have told him that siblings were the best relationships in the world; that his brother was his best friend; that they could tell what the other was thinking without ever saying it.

But now?

Quin shrugged. “It’s not…always easy to…[Read more]

Hi is this castle full or is there a possibility I could throw one of my characters into the mix?

Hi everyone!

Is this where cool people add their stories for critique? 😎

And can I join???😂

Yila 

Yila walked up to the target to retrieve her arrows. She had pulled the last one when the talkative knife girl appeared beside her, her eyes sparkling.

“Do you mind if I join?” she asked, holding out a handful of pretty throwing knives.

Yila stared at her. Here she had been enjoying some quiet weapons time, and knife girl just had the…[Read more]

Sahar

Acyn stared at me as though he had no idea what an inconsiderate fool he was being.

Yila was staring at Leytara as though she would be delighted to murder her.

I watched her, concerned. Her arm was healing fast, but there was still something off about her. Something that might have nothing to do with her arm.

Niarok stood in front of…[Read more]

@rebekah12

It did kinda die, didn’t it?

At any rate, I’d say you might want to use pronouns a bit more?  I didn’t read through the whole thing – it’s very long and I have a very small attention span (the joys of ADHD) – but I did read the first segment, and it seemed like you used Culvin’s first name an inordinate amount of times.  I would r…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

So how is Dutch weather in the winter?

Dutch people are good at two things. Complaining about the weather and complaining about prices. I have apparently adopted the former talent.

Cold. Wet. Dark. In that order XD. I have endless amounts of adjectives (all of them negative) to ascribe to Dutch weather in any of its seasons.…[Read more]

Aw, ok! *totally hasn’t done that to myself either* Take your time!

Hi everyone!  Update: I am destroyed with too much work. Therefore I will still show up with an awesome character at some point but it will probably take me longer to create said awesome character…

Okay see y’all around!😁

@rose-colored-fancy

If it’s up to Sahar, that’s a yes! XD Let’s see how that works out…

Lol! I’m definitely imagining Yila having some really bad days and then one day just randomly deciding that she’d rather be friends with Sahar than be on her bad side as it would take wayyy less energy! 😊

Wow, Yila and Niarok kind of remind me of Gavril and…

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@rose-colored-fancy

First of all, this entire exchange was HILARIOUS!! XD Y’all have the best senses of humor XD

Why thank you, Cathy does have quite the ability to take a conversation to the next level. 😄

Oooh, that’s odd! In fact, it isn’t particularly American. (Not arguing! Just adding my weird bits of knowledge 🙂 ) I’ve heard it often and I’m…

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@denali-christianson

I do hope that Sahar and Yila can become friends…

Yila secretly admires Sahar’s knives!

If it’s up to Sahar, that’s a yes! XD Let’s see how that works out…

I LITERALLY AM GOING TO SCREAM YILA TURNED INTO A PERSON OF HER OWN AND I DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT’S HAPPENING AND AHHHHHHH WHAT JUST HAPPENED???????????

I was just calmly…

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@rose-colored-fancy

SO, funny story, that’s actually the age I pictured her XD Sahar just talks that way to everyone she’s comfortable with XD (Niarok, Qatar, and Yila kinda scare her, though she isn’t letting on XD) Even Liorah, who is a head taller than her and one minor inconvinience removed from arson at any given time XD (Even funnier, Liora…

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Aw thanks!!! And I’ve been loving Sahar and Acyn!!

Yeah, characters just love surprising! Aaaaand you can test as a lot of different personality types depending on how suppressive you are, I’ve come out as an ENFJ when I’m overcompensating and an INFJ when I’m super depressed. The Phantom of the Opera is usually claimed to be a INTJ but he’…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

Hey just wanted to let you know that Leytera’s 17…

Sorry I forgot to make that clear… She’s just small-boned, that’s all.

SO, funny story, that’s actually the age I pictured her XD Sahar just talks that way to everyone she’s comfortable with XD (Niarok, Qatar, and Yila kinda scare her, though she isn’t letting on XD) Even…[Read more]

RAMSEUR I WANT A DRAGON FIGHT THIS WOULD BE COOL!!! (Though I know neither of us want our characters to lose (and actually I’m trying to make Malvat as over-powerful as possible ’cause that’s like his goal in life anyway so I’m not sure how he would lose except for one weakness he has which I would be surprised if any of the characters have the…[Read more]

@everyone

Hey just wanted to let you know that Leytera’s 17…

Sorry I forgot to make that clear… She’s just small-boned, that’s all. 🙂

Leytera

Leytera stared at the man as he walked away with the other girl.

A different girl appeared, smiling brightly with a hint of roughness on the side.

“Hello honey, don’t mind them, we just had a b…[Read more]

Klein heard Niarok cross the stream. The torch soon lit up the abandoned camp. The sudden change in light hurt his eyes. A fault discovered after the augmentation. Sometimes being able to see like a cat in the night could cause a sudden change in light to momentary blind the person.

“I’m Niarok, what did you find?”

Klein nodded at the notep…[Read more]