Elizabeth

By outer conflict, do you mean plot?

Also, by “character”, do you mean your main character? Villain? Side character?

Trying to understand so I can answer better. 😉

@kate It definitely flows better, but I still think it reveals too much about the story.

@gabriellepollack Daeus’ tag is @daeus-lamb

@kate Oh! That.

Honestly? It’s a bit wordy, and it reveals a little too much about the conflict of the story. It’s also a tad hard to read and the grammar is funky in places.

Other than that, it’s solid.

Uh…everything looks good…what was the question?

*is distracted by your gorgeous profile pic* You’re beautiful, love!

@morreafirebird I’m so in.

Okay…do you have any more questions, then?

Beeeeeeee careful.

I’ve struggled a lot with balancing different characters all at once, and what’s more, I’ve read books where the author attempted to do this and failed. I’m not going to tell you that having so many protagonists is wrong, because if you can do it well, than go for it. But I am going to warn you: not balancing your p…[Read more]

Okay. I think you’re misunderstanding things a bit here, so let’s separate a couple of these issues regarding your first question:

Character and Theme: These two issues are similar in different ways, but they’re also different. Based on what you said you’re trying to do, it sounds like you need to focus on character and theme as two separate is…[Read more]

@morreafirebird I vote yes for a villain’s thread. My little villain needs some serious help…

Have you ever read any of Wayne Thomas Batson’s books? Most of them, particularly the Sword in the Stars, manages to incorporate God into the story, by way of using either a specific name of God, or a specific attribute of His.

Others may disagree, but my personal opinion is that, in Christian fantasy, the most important thing is portraying God a…[Read more]

Hello there! Nice to meet you?

Where are you from?

@theinvizibleman That…is quite a list.

I’ve struggled with mine a bit (i’m not advanced) but I’m of the mindset that i’m Here to learn, not worry about what some quiz says I am.

You gotta give me more of a warning before you unload these heavy questions, Daeus. *snorts* *grins*

I’ll answer honestly. My honest answer is…I don’t know. I’ve yet to finish one of my recent WIPs, so I don’t know if I have any actual character issues, aside from the ones I’ve come across in the early stages of figuring them out.

*walks in playing with a yo-yo* I dunno, I read that as the little riff from the Wii build-a-Mii soundtrack thing.

Yo, yo, yo

Ooh, I’d love to!