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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Yeeah, Tammi didn’t think that through… but it’s funny and an accidental pun.
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
@this-is-not-an-alien
SPOILER OF UTMOST IMPORTANCE:Marian and her cyborg roommate Tammi have a pet cat with a bionic tail named Stumpy. Tammi likes to tinker and add modifications to bionics. Tammi got bored and added lights to Stumpy’s tail. Now he has taillights and chases them when they’re turned on.
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Yes…” Nathair said. “And we should probably leave this area soon before the authorities come.”
Caleb looked at the bar just in time to see a draker turn someone into a pancake against a wall.
“Actually, Snake-Punk has a good point. Let’s do that first.”
“Um, the bartender wants some compensation for the fight you started Nathair.”…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Supply the group? Who exactly was this Amnesia? Hopefully he wasn’t intimidating like the Necromancer. Although, Hades felt rather skeptical about getting help from Amnesia. This was an individual they didn’t know, who could easily ruin them if he was in the position of power the attendant placed him in.
A glance at his arm told Hades his arm was…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Thank you!
About the sci-fi story I was working on: I want to finish it, but I need to take a step back from it for a while since I need to rework so many aspects of it that it’s overwhelming and exhausting at the moment, especially since I went the wrong way about starting it (no outline or even an ending in mind 😬). So,…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
*Stumbles in, slurping coffee in wild speckled pjs*
Story, story precious?
More alien-human shortstory updates? No? No storyses?
I like worldbuilding races – maybe if you only focus on one or two but have the other’s pass through occasionally and explore them more in a different book?
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More stories, precious…? 🥺
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
SEARCH
“I’m not quite sure you’ll believe it.”
I’ve been friends with Burn for … three? Four? Years now. I’m sure I’ll believe it.
“But I was getting water from a steam near the site I was working on.”
Speed up to the unbelievable part.
“I encountered an enfield”
Another word for Colds?
“and the next thing I know, I’m in a cave with all th…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
I haven’t done something so convolutedly dumb since I impersonated a chosen from a dead religion…or cult…
That was definitely one of the more stupid schemes he’d been involved in…he still cringed a little thinking about it.
So instead of dwelling on that, Alessio started folding some of the tablecloths into makeshift bags to carry some more food…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
If anyone sees this, you don’t have to respond, I have to re-figure out my guiding principle because I found that it’s not the best choice to include something that might be taken as promoting astrology. So, sorry about that and to any parties disturbed or offended.
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Glaurung joined the group Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Arsene noticed when the table was upturned and he smirked. Snatching two pies, the gentleman thief vaulted over the tables, before throwing pies at Alessio and White Hair. Both of them dodge and… were they eating breakfast?
Uh, oh. Sherlock was glaring at him.
Arsene considered making himself scarce, when everything started to, in the best of…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Leana did squeak as the table flipped. As she saw the dark dust around the guy’s hand. Zounds. Eyes wide as the pans, she pressed her back against the upturned top. What do I do?
The idea to again run and hide, overtook her. The idea this was just a strange dream. Wondering who she could turn to. Why these guys were acting like little boys,…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Why can’t you use your own pockets?” Sir Scary demanded, as if he was talking to a child.
“I ran out of pockets.” Alessio explained briefly, a little too innocently. He’s going to hit me he’s going to hit me he’s going to kill me he’s going to hit me…
“I’m not going to keep your food in my pockets, Is that clear?”
“I’m going to…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Soo. ‘Search’ seemed upset with Blind Guy, Nathair didn’t exactly know why…
“Burn what did you do?” she accused
“I’m innocent.” He was freaking out like a little chastised puppy. “I am as innocent as…as a puppy.”
“Why are you like this?”
“No actually that wa-“ Nathair was going to defend Burn but Caleb was already pointing at him accusat…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Did he just shove food into his pockets?
Hades glared at Alessio for a few seconds, as he upturned a table for defense. The boy was currently scavenging more food and shoving it into Hades’ coat pockets.
“Why can’t you use your own pockets?” Hades demanded sternly.
“Because I ran out of pockets.” Alessio responded in an all too innocent…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Dang I don’t remember anyone’s tags…
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
@thisisnotanalien
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
@this is not an alien @calidirs
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ScoutFinch190 started the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Hi everyone!
@joy-caroline @rusted knight @Brian Stansell (or @O’brian-of-the-surface-world) @laugh-as-one-fey @anyone-else
I have a WIP world that I’m creating, and i was wondering if i have too many details (prepare for long rant on a made up world lol):
My guiding principles are that people(humans) are born with different gifts (called…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Best friend, name’s Sonja. But everyone calls me Search.”
Direct and polite. Strange considering Burn. But people were strange at times, Caleb shrugged.
“Can we focus on the holes in reality and getting back to where we belong?”
Nathair turned and looked at Caleb.
“Ah, good to see you! I knew you would make it eventually.”
Go jump off th…[Read more]
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