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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes! I do that with plants XD If I feel like actually talking while on a hike, I’ll tell people all about the plants along the trail and whether they’ll heal, feed, or kill you. I might have concerned @lady-grace when I informed her that we were camping next to a plant that could kill one if smelled.
Me:“Yes, it is poisonous. Look at the mottl…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
That. Was. Hilarious!
And your ideas for Kit and Val and Spire are so awesome! I love it when things just come together like that, simmering away in the mind 🥰
CASTLE COMMANDMENTS
1) Thou shalt not yeeteth the innocents.
2) Thou shalt change the Castle Commandments at thine own will.
Therefore, it follows…😁
3) Thou shalt yeeteth t…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Not a mix often seen. It’s nice 🙂
I have no idea what you’re talking about, but this sounds awesomely hilarious XD
And you’re welcome! It’s definitely angsty XD
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Yayyyy, it’s working!
@calidris That art is so good and so sad!
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Fantasy Writers/Character Castle Not Working? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes, it’s working well now. Thank you!
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Fantasy Writers/Character Castle Not Working? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, still messed up for me, it just doesn’t have the message about no matching template.
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 Reboot in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks for making this, @calidris !
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Fantasy Writers/Character Castle Not Working? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes, all the “main” genere type groups are having the same issue.
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, good XD
*chokes on tea* Yes, this! 😂
That’s so sad. If Mara knew, she’d talk to him anyway 😢
Thank you! Fun fact: that’s actually my hand in the picture XD It pays to work at a photo studio; I got to do an (medieval themed!) author photo shoot. And I think that particular picture is actually a happy…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Mara
The man took a moment before he relaxed and smiled. “I’m Frey. I thought you were a part of whatever dream this is at first.”
He laughs, and I frown. So this isn’t a dream, then? Frey’s next question came too fast for me to ask that one.
”What’s your name?” The wheelchair creaks the tiniest bit as he leans forward for my reply.
”Mara G…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Concerning Beta Readers and Editing (aka, I have QUESTIONS!) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Thank you so much for this explanation!
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Mara
I blink in the comparatively dim light in this next room. Is it dark enough to hide my face? I shudder. There is no way that woman was real. There is no way any success of mine could result in that. I crouch down, wondering whom I will catch in my operation.
Creak, creak.
My head whips around. A young man on a wheelchair rolls into the r…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
What a marvelous suggestion! Really, I’m concerned that this room will be filled with maniacal laughter. Fashion show! 🤣
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
She does have a negative character arc. It’s so hard to think of that when I’m writing her joking around with her little brother 😭 And the thing is, I don’t know if she’ll be redeemed! *wails* Little did I know pantsing could result in this 🙁
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Concerning Beta Readers and Editing (aka, I have QUESTIONS!) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
I definitely agree with what was mentioned about setting aside the book between drafts. For me at least, that’s been really important.
Thank you so much! I will most certainly let you know when I’ve got it ready!!
You’re welcome! I’m excited to read it!
I do have a few more questions though, not necessarily about beta reade…
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Concerning Beta Readers and Editing (aka, I have QUESTIONS!) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Hello @wingiby-iggiby
R. M. Archer put some really good advice in here, so I’ll just tack on this tidbit:
If you know that your first book needs major edits, definitely tackle that before you move on to the second. It’ll set the second book up with a better foundation in such a situation.
And I’d be happy to beta read your novel 🙂 I love beta…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
Ooh, those were all so great and fascinating!
Here’s one for Mara:
As I lunge toward the giants, the floor disappears. In fact, everything disappears. Only a white mist whirls around me while I twist weightless in the air. Is this whole thing just a bad dream? It’s all too fantastical to be real.
Or not. Being thunked on the floor hurts ple…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Cleanfunny exclamations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
When I’m coming up with exclamations, I usually draw from the story world and the character’s life. My favorite right now is probably “What the stupid flopping fish?” (My character was a fisher)
Sconeses, Precious? Seriously though, I’d be sooo disappointed if someone exclaimed SCONES! and there weren’t any 🙁
Brian and Rose’s sugge…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Personal Intro, and a short story in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 6 months ago
Hello, and welcome to Story Embers!
Wow, it sounds like Raoul has quite the road ahead. Happy writing!
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Ooh, Spire-not-Spire is sounding really interesting! And poor Val 😭
Yesss, the challenge! This is going to be fun. *cue Mara giving me worried glares*
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