Linyang Zhang

@devastate-lasting

Well, I better do this before I have to leave for the weekend. XD

• Style–I personally love your style, as it’s very similar to my own style and the styles I enjoy reading. It’s almost simplistic, but it carries a lot of weight, if you know what I mean. There’s a lot of depth to things in the way you write it, and I…

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@devastate-lasting

Great job! It reminds me of this big group game I’ve played before called “Assassin”… *shrugs*

– Style: I really liked your style; it made the whole story fun and intriguing to read.

– Characters: You described your characters really well; as a reader I could really get a glimpse of what they were thinking. I would…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting I’ll look it over! (Don’t worry, I emailed one of my friends a link to a story once and thought they were just ignoring me and then realized that I had emailed the wrong person. XD )

@devastate-lasting *raises an eyebrow* Oh, is that an invitation?

@sarah-inkdragon Alas for low daily book intake. But I am curious which new novels these are. Oh, and by the way — are the messenger falcons reliable? I’m thinking of employing some at the library for long-distance book loans.

@devastate-lasting

I’d love to come look at it! But you haven’t put it up yet….

@devastate-lasting Indeed I do. But I forgive you. *teasing grin* I do wonder, though, what you’re hiding in there that requires such drastic safety precautions.

@emgc Tea would be lovely. Want any help with it?

@catwing Interesting…

@sarah-narnathron Pleased to meet you too.

@emgc Hello there.

@devastate-lasting @sarah-inkdragon Can’t enter your homes, eh? Hah! See you ’round.

@seekjustice @kelly-lundgren @filewriter @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @enu @sarah-narnathron @warrenluther04 @princess-foo @karthmin @Erekdale-people-doing-nano
So I had an idea that we Ereki can buddy each other on the Nano site so that we can encourage each other. Or something like that. Good idea? 🙂
Of course this is only if you’re…[Read more]

@sarah-narnathorn That’s okay, I just appeared.

@devastate-lasting *grins* You think you know do you? *Tilts head* nah, you don’t. *vanishes*

@enu *unvanishes in front of you* Hi the Artisan, I’m Catwing. *extends paw to shake* Unfortunately I don’t need anything metal right now. *vanishes*

@emgc *unvanishes on the floor beside you* Hiya Em,…[Read more]

Here are the links, as promised:

1. Physical appearance/clothing:

http://www.well-storied.com/ blog/the-ultimate-guide-to- nailing-your-characters- appearance

2. Non-verbal communication:

https://writerunboxed.com/ 2018/06/11/non-verbal- communication-in-writing/

https://www.psychologytoday. com/us/blog/psychology- writers/201201/nonverbal-…[Read more]

Hail, friends!

We come to another week.

State how your goals went last week, and set new ones for this one! 🙂

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My goals were sadly unfulfilled, so I think they will remain the same, with some additions.

1. Get some work done in my WIP!

2. Critique two Ereki pieces in the critique section, and submit part three of my critique pieces for…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon Hello to you as well! Things go quite well. The library is well in order, and I’ve half a chance of doing some reading tonight. And yourself?

@devastate-lasting I’d still call that a threat, just a conditional one.

@devastate-lasting *grins a cheshire cat grin* *slowly vanishes, grin last as always*

@princess-foo
*watches you slip toward my corner*

@devastate-lasting
*grins* Yes. It is.

@sarah-inkdragon
Here and There. The occasional box.

@devastate-lasting
I don’t know. I haven’t seen Everyone for quite some time now and I think he may be lost again… Maybe the five of us shall go look for him sometime.

@devastate-lasting

So kind of you, my friend. Very well then, I shall come visit the Void, as you call it, yes?

@princess-foo

Ah, very nice to meet you then. *sends chocolate* I am usually an agreeable person, unless you touch my magical creatures or come into my house uninvited(or if you are a politician/salesman, if you just come near my land). But perhaps someday you would like to stop by for some coffee and cake? Chocolate, of course.

@catwing

Well,…[Read more]

*sits in the corner watching everyone’s monologues*
@sarah-inkdragon *thinks, ‘She seems nice.’*
@princess-foo *Grins*
@devastate-lasting *purrs* Well, well… *swishes tail*

@princess-foo

I return the curiosity, my dear peasant. Who art thou?

@devastate-lasting

Good to know, I shall forgo from barging into your home uninvited(or invited, I’m notably not one for leaving my castle grounds).

@devastate-lasting I would do it in first person. Sarah Inkdragon’s comment is an excellent example. Actions are set apart by * * and those are present tense, and everything else is dialogue, so therefore it is first person.

@princess-foo Sarah Inkdragon just introduced her character, and that seems relevant to your character’s interests, so…[Read more]