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Devastate Lasting started the topic Critique- A Time To Mourn, and a Time to Dance in the forum Critiques 6 years, 7 months ago
Hey everyone! I know I was supposed to post this tomorrow, but I definitely don’t have time then, so I’ll post it today, and you guys can look at it till October 6th.
The pending name is “A Time To Mourn, and a Time to Dance”, though if any of you have a better idea I’d love to hear it. It started off as some impromptu prose, which quickly turned into a short story…it’s formatted in a different style than I usually write, so it was really interesting for me. It’s kinda long, (the longest short story I’ve written to date) but it’s under 100,000 words, and because of the way it’s formatted it, should be really easy for you to stop and start again.
I’m not looking for much in particular, and any and all comments are welcome.
So…without further ado…here’s the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VmvDKC_zLE0p4YwWYKqIXbjgT65KONX0oPPEp_cUFrw/edit?usp=sharing
And I guess I’ll tag everyone…
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