Dakota

@dakota I think those are really cool ideas! 😀

@candide: I like the emotions and feelings you portray in your poem. 😀

@Dakota: You should build a collection of poems.

@dakota, @ellen-blanc, @jessi-rae
*runs up panting* I’m here, I’m here! And these are some great ideas! I will now try to convey my thoughts in a streamlined, comprehensible fashion…more or less. XD
(1) Plot: I like the idea of the party being for the prince’s coronation and that the prince “steals” himself. As far as whether his motives are…[Read more]

Awesome, Parimi Alca and @ariella-newheart!! Great job! 🙂

Good work, Meraki. If only life were not soooooo crazy……[Read more]

@dakota Hmm… Either option with the prince could be fascinating… I may be slightly partial to the one where he’s downright evil, but maybe thinks he’s good? They’re both great, though!

@ellen-blanc Ooh, a mountain city would be super cool! 😀

@dakota So if we’re the naming committee, what are we gonna call the kingdom? I like that idea. Oh! What if we have the city (or just a city) built inside of a mountain?

I supposed whether or not we let him achieve his goals depends on which set of goals we decide he has. If he is genuinely trying help his kingdom, our characters will likely help…[Read more]

Thanks, @dakota

I like small poetry. In fact, my goal is 15/18 lines. So, if it is not enough, let’s rewrite! (I intended to portray loneliness.)

Now, your turn, guys.

@dakota Aren’t we technically the naming committee? Hahaha XD So we agree on the climate, but what is the terrain like?

@jessi-rae
Those are great ideas, guys! But what’s his motive for trying to take over the kingdom? I mean, he’s fixing to be coronated anyway so why go through all that trouble? Is there corruption in the kingdom that needs to…[Read more]

@dakota I don’t see why the coronation couldn’t be on the prince’s birthday, and have a festival as part of the festivities… And I love the idea of the prince stealing himself to steal his kingdom’s money and then his father’s kindgom! XD

@dakota Np, I know from personal experience that phones can be difficult at times

@jessi-rae
Ignis’ question seemed to make Amber uncomfortable, but she and Megyn were getting along just fine so Ignis decided to slip away in search of her next target. Not surprisingly, Ignis located the girl still against the wall where Ignis first saw her. “So,…[Read more]

@dakota
Coolio. I’m going to go post in the rpg then(if I have time before class starts)
I agree we have the setting pretty clear, but there are a few minor things we can do to build the universe that I think would help a lot. For example, let’s name the kingdom, the continent, and maybe even the planet if we don’t wanna call it earth. XD Then…[Read more]

I’m just gonna go ahead and tag @jessi-rae because I think she’d like to join us 🙂

@e-b-raulands I like the title. It’s straightforward so there will be no confusion as to what the thread’s for. XD

Well, we could start by building the universe we’re in or we could get straight to the plot (whatever that is…). (I’m guessing by the title of the…[Read more]

@dakota: slides into the shadows “as you wish…”

@theinconceivable1

Haha, okay. XD

@dakota

Hey, that’s better than nothing. Thx! 🙂

@dakota, @ellen-blanc
“Likewise,” Amber smiled back. “How long have you two been here?”

“Me? I’ve barely been here twenty minutes.” Megyn laughed shakily. “And I still don’t understand how I got here.”

“Here as in this dimension or as in at this party?” Ignis asked.

“Did you two come togeth–” Amber began, then stood stock still. Wait. She d…[Read more]

@Dakota: Sorry, I don’t have any currently edited poems about. And the ones that I do have aren’t that good.