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  • Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago

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    Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

    My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

    The sunlight is dawning
    And though I am still yawning
    I will say ‘Good Morning’
    And open my ears to hear
    What You will say to me

    The sun climbing higher
    Ringed by gold, amethyst and fire
    As I sing hallelu
    And extol Your name to honor You

    Unto the hills so high
    Bathed in light from the golden sky
    To You I’ll lift my eyes
    And put all of my life into Your hands

    The sunlight is dawning
    And though I am still yawning
    I will say ‘Good Morning’
    And open my ears to hear
    What You will say to me

    Opening up Your Word
    Is the only way for Your voice to be heard
    To start this day off well
    I must gather truth and never sell

    Your words are pure and clear
    Every humble prayer You’ll hear
    So I will humble me
    And open my eyes to truly see

    So I’ll quiet the hour
    So my life isn’t turned sour
    I will say ‘Good Morning’
    And quiet the hour to hear
    What You’ll say to me
    Before I go about
    All the daily routine and route
    I’ll stay upon my knees
    Long enough to lift my heart’s pleas

    Help me quiet the hour
    So my life isn’t turned sour
    I will say ‘Good Morning’
    And quiet the hour to hear
    What You’ll say to me

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