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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
 Awesome!!
Ooo good question… but I actually don’t know… lol wow I’m so helpful
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Lol! Yeah, maybe we can do that. In my response I didn’t write the part where Dharin faded…so yeah, we can do that!
Thanks! *drinks tea gratefully*
I guess I’ll start with the out of context part lol!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Nithel turned around and stared at Jaylin. Apparently, he didn’t…
Suddenly Dharin yelled. Jaylin spun around and stared at his friend in shock. What is he doing? He slowly walked toward him.
“Hey, uh… are you okay?”
Dharin still stared at the mirror. “No. No, I’m not.”
Jaylin didn’t know what to say. “Um. I’m, uh, I’m sorry?” He tried.
Dhar…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
I’m writing a response, but I gtg
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Oh no! I wasn’t quick enough. Ugh! I wanted to talk to Dharin! *cries*
But I loved his ending. It literally almost made me cry lol!
Also, I like Vulferym!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey everyone!
Sorry I’m a little behind! After church tomorrow I should be able to sit down and write a part!
I also would like to bring in a different person, I’ve had Jaylin for couple months now lol!
I will put some different peeps and their bios later!
Glad you’re back! And I don’t mind that you brought Jaylin over to…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Yeah!
Well, if you ever have an idea that you want to ask if it’s cliche in any way, feel free to ask!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Grief in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago
Oof.
That was really good Kimmi!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey,
I think that sounds like a good concept so far! The only thing, you’ll have to be really careful not being to cliche. Books and movies and stuff dealing with people from earth, and other people from other planets or worlds seem to be the same thing…
But, what you have so far doesn’t seem cliche!
Hope that helps lol!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! =)
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Merry Christmas 2020! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!!!!!
The Christmas Song is my favorite Christmas song lol!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Okay got it!
Thanks!
Hmm, I think I like Virtus!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Jaylin’s eyes widened when he realized more mirrors were scattered on the walls, they widened further when he saw other people surrounding him.
What the heck is happening here!?
In front of him sat Nithel. He looked about as confused as Jaylin felt. At least I’m not the only one.
Nithel rubbed his back like he had had a hard landing. Nithel als…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@joelle-stone Wait, I am a little confused. I thought Lytt had been with Issac, not Dharin… When did Dharin come back?
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
So sorry all! I will catch up today!! I haven’t been on my laptop for a few days.
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@joelle-stone That sounds fine, though Jaylin never really interacted with Lytt so I never knew her character to well
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@this-is-not-an-alien Your character and story sound super interesting!
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 5 years, 6 months ago
=)
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Jaylin noticed the man had no idea what a handshake was, but he held up his hand, and nodded.
“Jaylin; calm, or inner strength. I am Nithel son of Father.”
Jaylin nodded back. “Nice to meet you Nithel…” his voice faded as the tunnel began to fill with a green looking smoke. “What’s going on?”
Nithel was looking around him with a confused look…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Oh, I see. Thanks!
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