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Sam M replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 6 years ago
@vic This was really cool! I enjoyed your vivid writing style. I also thought it was cool how she’s an assassin and a violinist.
Here’s a thought I had for a direction that you <i>could</i> take this: maybe Liz is a an assassin whose boss gives her assignments and she kills people without really knowing them. Then she ends up killing someone she…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 6 years ago
You’re welcome! 😀
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Gracie replied to the topic WWI in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years ago
Your story idea is amazing!
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Gracie replied to the topic Old West in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years ago
Wow! And awesome!
I have a book with that article in it. Amazing that you’re making a story from it! I really think it was real. They’re not the only ones who saw such creatures (though farther back a ways.) In 106ish BC Marcus Tulliues Cicero wrote about flying snakes, and where they lived. In the same paragraph that he talked about the ibis…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 6 years ago
@claire-h Great suggestions! Thank you! I’m also a violinist, so that’s where that comes from…. 😉
@anne_the_noob14 I hadn’t thought about Judy as being pivotal, but I like that idea. Thanks so much!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 6 years ago
OOOooooooo ok so I really love this?? That was really good!! 😀 😀
As far as suggestions go, I agree with what Claire already said about the different questions you could ask yourself. And reading through it again, Judy hit me as someone who could be pivotal, if you wanted her to be. She seems like she could know things. 🙂
Great job!! 😀
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Claire replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 6 years ago
*applause*
First of all, I love this. (One reason being that I’m a violinist) So cool. Great job!
Now for suggestions… Maybe just ask yourself some questions. Who is Liz? Does she work for herself? Is she a paid assassin? The member of a secret society? An undercover agent? Who is the man she shot? How does killing people make her feel? Is she…[Read more]
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Vic started the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 6 years ago
Hello!
I haven’t been on SE for quite awhile, but after taking a creative writing class this past semester I thought I’d jump in again.
Soooo, this was a random scene knocking around in my mind that I couldn’t get rid of and I thought I’d post and see if y’all had any suggestions for it, or for where it could go because literally this is all…[Read more]
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Oh. My Goodness. I love this!! I love thrillers, (my favorite genre), so this is up my alley! How much have you written so far? I would love to read more!
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@theswordinthebook This is all so far! I have a few ideas for where it could go, but nothing is settled yet.
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic WWI in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Interesting idea. To help with your kids and story maybe. War in itself is bad. Plain and simple. Kill or be killed. Not something God made us for. Now, I am thinking of becoming a soldier myself and have come to understand something. An unrighteous war is a truly evil war. Think WWII from the Nazi diehard’s view. How can one justify the death of…[Read more]
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Thank you. My best friend is in the Army. My uncle and grandfather were both in the Army. Which branch of the military are you thinking about joining?
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USMC
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Cool.
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Old West in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Well to help your story.
First, the time frame leaves you with Buffalo Bill’s Wild West show in Europe. The Wild Bunch are all dead or in prison. Richard West is the last of this group and was killed last year. Jesse James has been dead since 82. Frank James has been acquitted of all charges and is living quietly. Butch Cassidy and his Wild Bunch…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight posted an update in the group Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Hi! New man here I guess. History is my strong suite so most of my stories end up here. Hope I can help y’all.
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