@ariella-newheart
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
I love the mirror!!! And, well, I’m not an expert, but I wouldn’t be opposed to being one. A third of my books (and I have a lot) are about Hitler, the Allies, and other WWII things…Both in the Pacific and Europe.
Are you?
Really cool!
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Evelyn posted a new activity comment 5 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart Wow, congrats on graduating! That’s one huge accomplishment. Did you actually get a ceremony? 😛
What’s new… driving? xD
I finished my driving course over this whole pandemic thingy and now I’m keeping track of hours and am about one fifth of the way to getting my full license. Beyond that, finishing this year of school,…[Read more] -
Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Just counted. We have, as of Ninja and Arin joining (if @thedarkninja03 and @arindown don’t mind the nicknames 😛 ), and counting @christlover still, 9 people total. So we’re still good with the 10 character limit that was set. But yeah, another thread might be something to consider soon if we have more recruits 😉
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Hello, could I maybe be number ten?
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For sure!! Just figure out which character you’d like to bring, introduce/describe them, and then have fun! 😀
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Thanks!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@arindown I love Libby! Funny, my brother and I and some friends had a Nerf war just a few days ago XD
@thedarkninja03 And Blaze sounds awesome! I like your naming process, too 🙂
@ariella-newheart We seem to have a pretty good turnout here. Do we want to discuss making a second thread so this one doesn’t get too clogged up? And maybe moving one…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@tal Aah, gotcha.
@ariella-newheart You’re good! Yeah, so basically Dharin and Jaylin left the girls back in the hall, and now they (the guys) have run into Isaac and then Luke. Issac is masquerading as a Frenchman, and Dharin is by now almost totally convinced that this whole thing is an experiment that’s being run by a team of wizards. 😀
Hope…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Haha hey! Yeah, I’m a bit discombobulated as well haha! So Marlowe was talking to Claire’s character Emory right?? So the boys left them behind in the hall, and then Claire dropped out so…! You maybe can just bring Marlowe back in and she runs into the guys. Conner and the other girl…oh yeah, Charlotte are not really doing…[Read more]
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Evelyn posted a new activity comment 5 years, 8 months ago
YOU WHAT
*screams*
xD@ariella-newheart I came to your profile to say, hey! How are you doing? Because I was thinking about a bunch of Parimis this morning and boy I am so happy I did.
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@evelyn Hello! It’s so good to hear from you! I am doing quite well. Having graduated high school, I’m still trying to figure out what I’m going to do with myself, but my blog has been a good creative outlet.
How are you? What’s new?
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@ariella-newheart Wow, congrats on graduating! That’s one huge accomplishment. Did you actually get a ceremony? 😛
What’s new… driving? xD
I finished my driving course over this whole pandemic thingy and now I’m keeping track of hours and am about one fifth of the way to getting my full license. Beyond that, finishing this year of school,…[Read more] -
@evelyn I had an online graduation! It was not what I was expecting at the beginning of the school year, but it accomplished what it was supposed to. 🙂
Ah yes, driving. I’m getting more comfortable with the activity, though I’m nowhere near ready to get my license. It’s awesome that you’re making progress, though! It will be exciting when you…[Read more]
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@ariella-newheart Oh interesting! I heard that some people were doing that… did it go smoothly? Did it feel sufficient for wrapping up lose ends?
Oh yeah I’m /very/ excited. xD I’ll be planning coffee dates, and museum and hiking trips like every week.
(okay not that often but still pretty often xD)Ooooh WOW. YOU HAVE TO KEEP ME UPDATED. Is…[Read more]
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@evelyn It did go smoothly! We recorded the video in one day and it aired the next week. Everything was well put together and I enjoyed it.
Thanks for your enthusiasm! The story that I’m editing is the first in the five-book series! My last few beta-readers are going through the book and I have a friend who is going to help me figure out how to…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
There we go!
@claire-h @kristianne-hassman @beth-20 @ariella-newheart @everyoneelse
We’re all good again, y’all! 😀
I’ll try to write something soon…
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Selah CJW started the topic Summoning Beta Readers! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 8 months ago
Hello, all! It seems like ages since I’ve last been on here, and I’m sure I’m missing some tags for my former beta group…if so, I’m sorry. ::P I’m tagging what I hope is all of you who currently have access to my book even if you have not read it yet, and probably some of you who don’t. I know there’s gotta be a couple of you tagged who haven’t…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@claire-h About your question about the protocol for writing other people’s characters… On the first thread we did this on, everybody just kinda wrote everybody. I’d say that unless someone specifically asks that their character be written only by them, we’ll just go ahead and write other people’s characters as best we can with the info we’ve…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
@beth20 Heyo! So basically, bring one of your characters over and have him/her interact with everyone else’s, or with the castle itself 🙂 And @ariella-newheart can give you a more detailed explanation if you’d like. I’ve gotta run off and do some schoolwork right now 🙂
@everyone Right, so I’m gonna try to write some more soon? But no…[Read more]
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Claire replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
@ariella-newheart @christlover @anne_the_noob14 @kristianne-hassman
Ok guys,here goes Emory’s introduction… 🙂
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Emory recited under her breath a few lines of the poem she was memorizing. “The tapestry woven of sorrow swayed in the icy wind. The hearth was dark and the room was cold…” Wait. Or was…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
@ariella-newheart @christlover @claire-h @everybodyelse
It’s short, but Ariella’s gonna have to take over with what Marlowe says next, so… *shrugs*
Here we are:
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He sheathed his sword as he opened the door, smiling as he thought about Dragon. She was a good horse, and served him well in his long trips. He knew she would be relaxing…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
@ariella-newheart Hey, what kind of clothes does Marlowe wear?
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
@naiya-dyani DON’T YOU DARE HURT MY BABY
Kiet, lemme know if I need to send Dharin over and kidnap you, ‘kay?
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Nice, nice! I like the vibes she gives off. *nodnod*
Running behind on my next installment. Might get it finished after supper, but most likely tomorrow or the next day!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
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Claire replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
This is looking like so much fun! And I think you need another girl in the mix. 😉 It sounds like poor Charlotte might have a time of it dealing with Dharin and Connor. Lol. So I figured I’d better bring in Emory, one of my MCs.
Unfortunately, she’s not very headstrong. As a matter of fact, she’s very easy-going and pliable.…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @ariella-newheart @the-others-on-this-thread
I’m sorry–I know I popped in earlier, but I thought I should let you know that I don’t think I can join right now . . . as usual, I piled too many things on my plate and am just trying to get those under control! 😅 But thank you for the thought, Livi! I hope you guys have a grand…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago
@ariella-newheart
YOU’RE KILLING ME, ARIELLA!!!! *cries*
I just finished it… and EEEESSSSHHH IT’S SO GOOD D’:
Ok! So as you’ve seen, I’ve left some comments on the doc, albeit mostly consisting of distressed fangirling 😛 SO! Here’s my thoughts.
First off, I LOVE your characters. You have very strong characters, and Ari is very…[Read more]-
@anne_the_noob14 AHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH! I do have a few questions!
First, did you notice any useless side plots or rabbit trails that I could potentially eliminate, or did all of them help strengthen the main plot? Second, do you have any predictions/thoughts regarding the foreshadowing about Ariella’s identity and origin?
Regarding that last…[Read more]
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😀 😀
Hmm… Not really. If there were any, they obviously didn’t stand out to me lol. Let me think… Yeah, I think they were all strengthening!
Predictions and thoughts… oh gee. Let me see. I forget if I said this specifically earlier, but I really like how you keep throwing more and more little tiny pieces of where she’s from and all. That…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle posted a new activity comment 5 years, 9 months ago
@ariella-newheart No problem! I left myself a bookmark on page 39, and I’m gonna read more tomorrow! I really love it so far! Looking forward to seeing where you go with it!! 😀 😀
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