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Lin replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 1 month ago
@ads_forest Can’t wait to see more of your work! 🙂
@the-fledgling-artist Why thank you miss Fledge! The same should be said about you. I loooovee your art style! 🙂
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Lin replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 1 month ago
@ads_forest Hi there! Your drawings look pretty good, especially for a beginner! I agree with everything @the-fledgling-artist just said. Keep on drawing and you’ll start seeing the things you could improve on. 🙂
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The Fledgling Artist replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 1 month ago
Hey! For someone who’s only dipped their toes into the world of art these are very good! The first thing I notice here is that your art has a lot of emotional expression and life to it.
Unfortunately, the thing with art is that the only way to get better is to practice. Fortunately, if you want to get better, all you have to do is…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Posting my art for the first time! in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 1 month ago
@ads_forest I’m not a good artist (yet xD) but I just wanted to drop in and say I love your work! Wow, those eyes and noses. Great job! 😀
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audrey.the.author replied to the topic New Year Resolutions! in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@ads_forest You’re welcome! I agree. Excellent! Have you decided on where you will attend college?
My availability to write depends on the quarter. I also think it would depend on the person taking the classes. Personally, I have found three classes to be excruciating, and my writing was limited to jotting down every inspirational or poetic thing…[Read more] -
audrey.the.author replied to the topic New Year Resolutions! in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
I have not been one to make New Year’s resolutions, and I still struggle to understand why that is the case. However, I tend to sit down before each college quarter and make some bullet journal pages about health, homework, writing, and such. This time (school starts tomorrow), I took things a little further and made several pages of focus points…[Read more]
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Introverted Elf replied to the topic Help with Good, Grabbing Plotlines in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
Okay, thanks so much! I’ll have to try those out whenever I’m stuck on my (many) plotlines. 🙂
“Keep in mind, there’s a wide range of people who probably have the same interest in the stories and plots you do.” Wow. I’ve actually never thought about it that way… But that is interesting and motivating. :D…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Our Annual Theme? in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
No idea…. I don’t even know what that is….
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Dee-G Blueshine replied to the topic New Year Resolutions! in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@ads_forest Thanks! I’m pretty excited for it!
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A. D. S. replied to the topic Role Play for Learning in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
It’s a made up Union. It’s essentially a dystopian government and I couldn’t come up with a better name. Lol
As for where Kayto is, I think I might have misread what happened up to this point in the story.
So I’ll let you guys decide where to put him. Maybe whoever post next can clarify that.
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Role Play for Learning in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
Is this Union as in your Union in a book or as in the actual Union in history? Also. Is Kayto (cool name by the way) with the twins, Scarlet and Ty or with Karra, statue Belial and Jake? )
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I, David replied to the topic Role Play for Learning in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
( @ads_forest I blinked in disbelief. Nice tag, though. Hans is jealous. XD
Also… Getting some strong EoME vibes from your MC.)
(Also-also, you may want to read the last 5 pages to try to catch up. Just fyi. XD)
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Kayla Joy replied to the topic Tormenting a Character in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
Yes, my main character will learn that hurting people is not right, but not until about halfway through the book. I feel really mean for making my character go through this, but she has to in order to grow.