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@emily-waldorf

Wow your chapter was so good! I feel like you got the hang of Daire too XD

@jared-williams

I love love love Ku’aya already! Her thoughts on Lorcan were hilarious!!

 

Lorcan

The girl gave him a gracious smile. “I’m perfectly well, thank you.”

There was a long pause between them. “Daire told me your name was Lorcan.”…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Mr.Trip Williams wrote:
I tried to pour everything you’d want in a big brother into him… which is an interesting dichotomy, since he’s my protagonist. =) Great job on the post!
Why is it a dichotomy? Don’t people like big-brother protagonists?

Mr.Trip Williams wrote:
Oh, that’s awesome. I wouldn’t worry about consideri…[Read more]

Why is it a dichotomy? Don’t people like big-brother protagonists?

Thanks! I’m afraid I can’t tell you any more about the heartbeat of eternity, because it’s not something I’ve thought out, lol. I was reminded of one line in a poem by Rupert Brooke: [underlined]

And think, this heart, all evil shed away,

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haha! so do I!!! Let me know if you find one!

You know, I wondered that myself, but at the same time… I didn’t change it because the young buck circled the ground at its feet, but it also circled the ground where the saliero’s feet had just been……. so if it is read one way or the other, I figured it was still accurate….

haha.…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Hi! *tries to speak in other languages* *remembers she doesn’t know any other languages* Um… hi again? (pretend I’m speaking in Spanish, okay? Just for the sake of me trying to copy you. 😂)

Frankly, I’m still trying to figure out what I write. But I mainly write fantasy right now. I’m working on editing my first…[Read more]

@annabelle-batie

Hi and welcome!

Hallo und willkommen!

Hej och välkommen!

Hola y Bienvenido!

 

What do you write?

@annabelle-batie,

Awesome! Best of luck. 😉

@joelle-stone

LOL, okay, I’m glad I wasn’t intruding. I can help critique… which’ll probably mean reading through the last few pages of messages. XD I’ll read through them sometime today!

@jared-williams,

WOW. Just… WOW. You have this sense of humor running throughout, and each of the characters are so different that they’re easy to tell apart, though each are relatable too. Your prose is exquisite, and your worldbuilding is incredible!! Which means I need a picture of the tannik’esh. Like now. XD

One word of critique:

I looked…

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@annabelle-batie,

OH NO A STAALLLKKKEEERRR!!! *runs in terror*

Jk. 😛 Glad to see you over here! *waves*

Um… mind if I join in the conversation? Sorry if I’m like way too late for that…

I also don’t feel like reading through 27 pages of this, so could somebody update me on what is being talked about now?

Nope, not at all! Anyone is welcome…[Read more]

Aha, yes I did! Thanks for tagging me! *darts over to read*

@crazywriter,

The plan is to be done with Ch. 4 by next week! 🙂

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With shouts of triumph, the fort’s defenders welcomed the reinforcements. It took the company of almost 500 men more than an hour to get inside the fort, simply because of the narrow gate, and the many wagons of supplies.

Major Maguire led the column, but broke away to s…[Read more]

Hi everyone!

Um… mind if I join in the conversation? Sorry if I’m like way too late for that…

I also don’t feel like reading through 27 pages of this, so could somebody update me on what is being talked about now?

Hi, @joelle-stone! *waves* If you think I’m stalking you, then that is not on purpose. XD You just happen to appear everywhere I am.

@inkhorn

Bwahahahaha no! I mean, no, I won’t tell you. ::D grins evilly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

p.s. She…

@jared-williams

What Abirami warmed my little ol’ heart! 🙂 As for Ku’aya, well, I love how Abirami has just collapsed from the pain, and she just goes, “Yup, stupid.”

If I could just protect him from that, even a little… perhaps I could repay just a bit of what I owed him.

Not that I could ever repay him fully.

This thought of hers really m…[Read more]

hahaha. I like him!

Ha! That’s awesome. I wasn’t sure, but figured it would be fun to play them off each other since their personality is kinda similar (on the pessimistic side)

ha. thanks! He fixed what he broke 😉 I like him too. I tried to pour everything you’d want in a big brother into him… which is an interesting dichotomy, since…[Read more]

Halmar

This was much more interesting than anything I would otherwise have done. I whistled a tune, more to distract myself from worry than anything else. This would be fine.

Sure, there was a dead dragon in the corner, several unfamiliar people were teeming about it and there was more blood than I liked to see, but this was fine.

One of the…[Read more]

(Eeeewwwww)

Kallun nodded. “We are staying the night here.”

Pia sat on a fallen log, “it’s been a long day.”

(they’re pushing the whole lgbtq+ thing really hard right now)

“So, what brought you here? Fate? Destiny?” Ellie asked.

“A horse.” Finn said quietly dropping Pia’s hand and walking over by his sister, “Actually me and Blondie saw the smoke from the fire and decided to follow it.”

“We weren’t sure if you had survived the attack.” Eliana said…[Read more]

Aannd, all my italics disappeared, but it’s too much work to change it. 🙁

* she is on a mission to find out if she can be released from a certain curse, because if she can’t she’s going to die in a week no matter what she does because of [circumstances].