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  • #147257
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    ”they can be… violent.” Pia replied. “Although the clans are usually more destructive with each other than with strangers.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147285
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Well. I suppose we should get going. We aren’t going to get anywhere just standing here. You said north?” Ellie asked while pointing south.

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147289
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun chuckled and gently pointed her hand in the right direction. “North.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147293
    Erynne
    @erynne

    (Ok, is frozen playing through your mind too? XD)

    “Oh!” Ellie blushed, but to her advantage no one was able to see, or at least she hoped. “I, uh, spend most of my time in the castle. Directions aren’t something I’ve dealt with much…” her last sentence trailed off. “Anyways! Let’s go” she started at a quick pace before she  had the chance to embarrass herself again

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147294
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (Oooooohhhhh hahahaha)

    Pia tossed Kallun her helmet and pike, which he caught in smooth gestures. As they walked, she repinned her long, strawberry-brown hair up into a low bun, with some short wisps seeking refuge around her face. Kallun handed her the helmet again, which she gingerly put on, then she took her pike back. This was all done in silence as they walked, but between good friends who understood each other even without talking.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147317
    Erynne
    @erynne

    The tunnel became darker as they went deeper in. The blue glow from the stones on the wall was now there only source of light. Ellie stayed as far away from the wall as possible trying to avoid being shocked again. Julian stayed to the side closer to the wall.

    Julian quickly stopped, “stop” he whispered, “do you hear that?”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147325
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun’s pointed ears almost perked up as he paused to listen. Pia did too. It was a tapping. Maybe footsteps? Kallun wasn’t sure.
    “I think it’s water.” Pia replied.
    Kallun’s eyebrows rose.
    She caught his look, “My hearing is better than yours, Kallun Cemon Strenght, and you know it.” Her voice was edge was ice.
    He nodded.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147330
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “I’m glad it isn’t footsteps,” Ellie said, “but if it’s water, maybe that means we’re close to the river.”

    “Wait, wait. Kallun Cemon Strenght?” Julian said on the verge of laughter

    (Is that the right phrase or did I make up the word verge? XD Sorry, I’m tired)

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147334
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia gave the other princess a nod.

    Kallun glanced at Julian, “Yes. And?”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147340
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Ellie glared at him but didn’t know if he could see it in the dark. “Oh come on, you gotta admit it is a little funny”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147345
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun remained serious, “What about it is so?”
    Pia smirked.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147348
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Julian started laughing, “all of it!”

    Ellie rolled her eyes.

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147351
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia took Kallun’s arm, “Don’t be a fool, Julian.” She said, “Kallun’s half Mallean and half human. He’s not full blooded Mallea.” She explained. “In the Realm it’s tradition that the father gives the first name and the mother gives the second. His father was Mallea and gave Kallun, which means ‘Savior’ in Mallean. His mother was human and gave the name Cemon, a Terriadi name which has several meanings, Free Spirit, Visionary, and also Highly Attractive.”

    Kallun’s face flushed at her pointed look she gave him when she said the latter.

    Pia then continued, “Strenght is also Mallean, and means strength, or strong one. So his full name is really more prophetic, especially in the Mallean mind. It means ‘Strong Spirit that will save a broken and captive world.’”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147373
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Yeah, he seems to be doing an excellent job at that. Is that why we’re trying to get through a tunnel going who knows where and doing who knows what afterwards?”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147374
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun stopped walking. “No.” He replied tersely.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

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