“Escape from Ackerley” a collaborative story
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Hey! I made it! 🙂 Hi @jasmine, @crazywriter, and @rebekah12! Kinnan here. 🙂
Hey, @joelle-stone / Kinnan! Nice to see someone familiar’s joining 🙂
Hwæt! Wē Gār-Dena in geār-dagum, pēod-cyninga, prym gefrūnon, hū õā æpelingas ellen fremedon!
Yay, cool! I would suggest me taking over Akaya, but I’m WAY underqualified for her complex character, and I don’t know her secret, sooo…. How do y’all feel about a deer buck coming in?
That sounds awesome! a Deer Buck will fit in perfectly with our random mix of characters!
that sounds Perfect! especially sense Ferguson is the only male. *sighs* alas! Poor Ferguson.
Go ahead and write out your character and drop him in whenever.
Beautiful things don't ask for attention
Feel free! A deer buck sounds great 😉
Hwæt! Wē Gār-Dena in geār-dagum, pēod-cyninga, prym gefrūnon, hū õā æpelingas ellen fremedon!
@everyone,
Ok, I think I’ve got the main gist of the story:
Farley & Ferguson meet; Farley & Akaya meet; Ferguson & Faith meet; a big earthquake shatters everything; Silent has a cave-in that damaged her paw, revealed her fire-breathing abilities, and conveniently got her separated from her pack (how lovely); somehow they all meet up in a den and get to know one another; they all decide to head for the river where *cough cough* something might *cough cough* happen to Akaya.
Did I get that right? Is it ok if my buck is down there (at the river) too?
So I decided (after much debating between mule, white-tail (both of which I see a lot where I live) and red deer) to use a red deer stag. I might have to do research on them and stuff, so forgive me if I get facts wrong (IDT any of us live in Europe, though, so hopefully y’all won’t know *crosses fingers*) XD
Scratch that. I prefer whitetail. (See, I told you I debated over this a lot!) Anyway, set on that now.
Name: Ash
Age: 2 (they normally live 4.5 years)
Gender: Male
Species: White-tailed buck
Personality Traits: Strong-willed among friends, shy among strangers; flighty; clever; selfish
Physical Traits: Fast. Very fast. And can jump high. Strong for a deer, renowned for his fighting abilities.
Appearance: Like this:
@joelle-stone Ash sounds (and looks) great!
I love white-tail deer 😀
Hwæt! Wē Gār-Dena in geār-dagum, pēod-cyninga, prym gefrūnon, hū õā æpelingas ellen fremedon!
Ok, things are clearing up, and i’ll try to post some. Is it all right if i kinda start with me stumbling upon the other characters? I cant really remember details of the rest.
Ferguson moved through the trees quickly. This was bad. Really bad. He wasn’t a team player but he knew he’d need allies. He quickly followed his nose, smelling something like–deer?
@joelle-stone
I love your character! This is going to be so fun!Akaya turned and walked toward the river. Farley still hesitated.
something is wrong.
A little voice in the back of her head warned her.
Don’t go. Stay. Hide. Something is wrong.
Akaya turned and looked back at Farley. “Are you coming?” she asked. Her voice was heavy with grief. Grief for her pack, Farley knew.
Farley didn’t want to go. She wanted to run back to her den…if it was still there. It probably wasn’t. She was thirsty.
No, not the river
Could she leave Akaya? Yes. She could. But something inside of her didn’t want to. Why? Is this how Akaya had felt for her pack? Farley had never really KNOWN anybody. Never had a connection with anybody. It was the way of the fox. This was new. The want to be with someone else was new.
“I…”
Don’t go don’t go don’t go
“I’m coming.” Farley said. And trotted toward Akaya.Beautiful things don't ask for attention
@everyone: Yay! Glad Ash is ok with y’all!
@crazywriter: Hey! Good to see you again!Quick question (hopefully someone can answer fast): what season is this?
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