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Princess Foo started the topic Critique: Ella of Cinders in the forum Critiques 6 years, 8 months ago
It’s NOT that time of month again. I feel like I should be doing Warmaster-y things since I’m tagging the entire guild, but NOPE! It’s critique time. My short story is called Ella of Cinders. Hopefully, it’s pretty clear what kind of story it is within the first page.
I don’t have any specific things I am looking for, but all comments are welcomed. We will be working on this story for two weeks before it is someone else’s turn.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zk8QldbQbAJvfYEpCACVx6Styismop3E1euVHGYnrMs/edit?usp=sharing
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