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@crazywriter

Whoa, like Thwap said, I never would have thought of that; not in a million years! Brilliant!

@kylie-wingfeather

*bangs head on desk*

I’m learning Latin too, and should have remembered that! Gee… Though I don’t think I had learned that word yet at that time. Thank you for the correction! Maybe Silvia could have a silver necklace…[Read more]

The girl looked up at me with watering eyes, and smiled. I stared at her for a moment; her smile looked so much like Adelaide’s. Adelaide, for your sake I’ve done at least one right thing, if only small. Suddenly, in a burst of sobs, Ehud drops down in front of the girl and wraps her in a great hug, crying as if he was the one who nearly lost a d…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Lol, right? You hardly ever know what’s going to happen until you write it. And then you really get yourself into trouble sometimes. And lol, I guess you did. XD

Ditto 😛

Revealed a lot about Wylo, though, excellent post!!

Thank you!! I really, really enjoy writing about him…. its like I uncover something I didn’t know each time! D…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

And I just saw your new quote thingy; I love it! Who/what is it from?

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you! When I read my first battle scenes, I cringe. A lot. So that means I’ve improved, right? XD

Ha ha, you’re right! I don’t really want to go back and read all my old attempts at writing…. I’m afraid I’ll mentally scar myself 😛

And that character psychology is great! Not boring at all, and probably a lot more c…[Read more]

WYLO

Kiark is still lying beside me, completely unconscious. I don’t really know what to do, so I reach into my coat and pull out my little vial. It is dark maroon with a cork cap. I unplug it, gently pry open his mouth, and pour in some of the shining yellow liquid. It is a pain-killer and anti-infectant. I used it to help the Baneronians, and s…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you so much! You’re doing a great job with Kiark and Wylo! I usually struggle with battle scenes, so I’m glad you like it!

Thank you!!! 😀 And I never would have known that you struggled with battle scenes had you not told me!

Also, poison is an amazing idea! I can’t wait to see how that works out!

Ha ha, thank you! I get…[Read more]

@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien @jasmine

Yes; they should stay together! But I would like to do greatest fears, if that is alright with y’all 😉

Cathy, it’s so sad that no one takes Ehud seriously! And a glow-in-the-dark pink pony…. you are hysterical!

Also, everyone, this post is SOOOO long cause I was trying to fit everything in like…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I just wanted to say I love how much you make the battle come alive for Liorah!

@joelle-stone

That was a wonderful idea, having Riure laugh!! I love it; it is totally something she would do 😀

@this-is-not-an-alien

Aw, thank you!

And ha ha, that’s so funny how Wylo gave you that fire idea, lol 😛 I wonder how often we are…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

I forgot to mention how much I loved Ehud’s fight with that thing! 😀

@rusted-knight

Yes, thank you! I totally did not know what I got Kiark into there, and how on earth he would get that thing off, ha ha.

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ikr, like all our babies are reckless headless chickens

Yes! 😛

And thank you! I’m so glad you liked it and that it actually flowed well…. I thought it was choppy, he he. And oh man,…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

I ’twas no longer than mine! 😀 Btw, I love the way you portrayed Riure in that post! The part where she remembered her training was particularly interesting, and it shows that although you are blind, you can still protect yourself! That knife was also a really cool idea! I just thought of this, but my mom knew an old man who worked…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I know!!! I’ve done it a bunch of times, *sigh*

And your fight scene was great! I’ll try to get something rigged up…

@everyone

This post of mine is sooooo long bc I’m trying to fit everything in! 😀

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Her face was a mix of absurd amusement and snarkiness; I didn’t get it, and it made me madder. What she said next m…[Read more]

Ok, got some time!

@joelle-stone

Thank you! 😀

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ha ha! We have a bunch of characters with a lot of over-developed nerves, lol! 😛

@rose-colored-fancy

You’re totally welcome!

Don’t worry about Liorah’s rudeness! Kiark is completely out of hand….*rubs forehead*

And thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it!!…[Read more]

I feel like I keep posting things and talking, but I wanted to let y’all know that I don’t know how often I’ll be posting this week. I’ve got some stuff to catch up on, but I didn’t want to leave y’all hanging without at least a bit of rope to hang on to! See y’all later! 😀 Merry Christmas!

*I made a decision after I posted that, and now I can’t edit….*sigh* I actually don’t want Wylo to enter the room/place behind the mirror! Is it alright if we ignore that? Thanks! 😀

@jasmine

Don’t worry about it! I get confused myself! 😉

@joelle-stone

You’re fine! I think we’re all darting around like Ehud! 😀

@this-is-not-an-alien

*Laughs nervously* Oh man, Rosario pushed Kiark’s “explode” button like five times, lol! 😛 Please don’t take any offence from his rant; he had it coming to him at some point, ha ha. He’s…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

He is nerveless, lol 😛

@backwardslivewriter

Ooo, that’s so cool that they remember everything!

@rose-colored-fancy

Oh, that makes sense (head jewelry 😉 )! And whatever idea you have, noticing drafts was clever 😀

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“You…would have to be approved by the majority.” The girl named Rosario said haltingly. I raise my ey…[Read more]

Wylo stared at the boy with blank eyes. “Hey? Are you ok?” Was that really what he said? He had appeared out of nowhere. The High-duck was so startled that he couldn’t really think. Part of it was because he had lived the past several years away from positive human contact, but most of it was just surprise — surprise that a person would…. Care, m…[Read more]