Leon Fleming

@w-o-holmes Mhmm. If anyone wants to assume a responsibility, they’re welcome to.

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It would work better as a sub-plot rather than the main plot/focus of the story.  And epic scene of fantastical genius would be awesome!

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That would be quite interesting.  In the right story, that could also be a great addition!  It’s definitely something good to think about.

@w-o-holmes First of all, thank you for not forgetting me. 😉

Second of all, like Erica said, lovely! However, I am afraid critique on poetry is not my strong point, especially with all the different styles and techniques and goals and visions that people have. *sighs* I wish I could help more…

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“Btw, it really isn’t MY definition. I am a Christian based on my doctrine that I believe in. Based upon the Bible. People call themselves Christians but not all the time that is true. You can’t believe everything you hear, you know? My point being, a Christian is not just any person. A Christian is someone who repents and bel…[Read more]

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Yep!  So you brought it upon yourself!

There seems to be a theme of dwarves being looked down on.  Hmm.

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*Sighs* I am sorry… I have multiple tags that I haven’t responded to, but here I am, I read the poem.

It was lovely! I love the word choices and the way it tells a story. I really love nautical/ocean anything, so this definitely was enjoyable to me. I honestly don’t know how to critique poetry as I’m still such a novice pretending…[Read more]

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Um, I dunno—like, there are sometimes when I get annoyed that I can’t do something, but normally it’s little things. Like arranging a photo or something. But it’s nothing too major for me.

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Hm, I’ll have to check it out. I’ve only used Blogspot (or blogger?) and WordPress. I hated blogspot but WordPress has been really good for me so far.

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Oh that’ll be cool. I’ve never used WIX before, but I’ve heard of it.

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Awesome! It’ll be cool to see your blog when its up. 🙂

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Yes, you did bring this whole thing up, so you get the lead it.

In the world where I have dwarves, I think my other Races will look down on them.  The reason is, the dwarves don’t really socialize or trade or anything.  They keep to themselves and don’t like talking with the other Races.  If a dwarf and another Race see each other on…[Read more]

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So, back to the dwarves . . . any particular aspect of them we should talk about next?

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Ah, that makes sense.

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I do not understand what ‘ight means.

Thank you!

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Indeed, we do.

Let me know which one you settle on!

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I suppose our taste buds are very different.

I love the last name Norfleet, and it looks like that’s a pretty popular one in your name choices.  For first names, William Norfleet sounds really good, but I don’t know if you want to have your real name and pen name combined.  There’s nothing wrong with it being combined, I just don’t k…[Read more]

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Guacamole is amazing!

I like the name Leon Fleming.  What are some of the other names you’ve been thinking of?  My pen name used to be Jean Trill, then I settled on Tashah Claymore.

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You . . . don’t . . . like . . . guacamole??  What!?  You are strange indeed.  I rarely ever go to Burger King, but I might have to just for the strawberry Dr. Pepper.

Yeah, a fantasy desert could be a lot different than the deserts we have here in the real world.  And the plants would be a lot different.

Also, who is Leon Fle…[Read more]

@w-o-holmes Mt. Dew has never been a favorite of mine, but cream soda’s pretty good.  I never knew strawberry Dr. Pepper existed!  I’ve had cherry Dr. Pepper, which was really good.  I’ll have to see if I can find the strawberry one!

Hmm, with the dwarves, that’s a good point.  Maybe the desert dwarves live in small colonies and eat small mam…[Read more]