I’m still willing to work on this, although I may have to delay some things in favor of homework. Would it be easier to have a meeting time set up and discuss things on a call of some sort? It might be easier to reassess where we are. If not, that’s completely fine.

@the-fledgling-artist Do you have any critiques for this piece? This is from a little while ago, but I was wondering if you had any idea of things I might be able to improve upon.

Thank you very much! Hands and feet have always been one of my weaker points when it comes to drawing, and I never know where to start when working on improving them. Thank you so much for the feedback and I hope you’re doing well.

Era hasn’t really gone anywhere, as far as I know, I believe she’s still somewhere outside the prison. I think it would be nice to have another part from Pasha’s POV when he meets up with Era. They’re very adorable in a room together and you do a very good job writing them. 🙂

I’m not sure if anyone would know who this character is XD

I’ve already posted this elsewhere and been told that the knees are a little difficult to differ from the rest of the leg. The lines are supposed to seem simple and blocky, but please feel free to critique it. Something’s …[Read more]

More experimenting with my alcohol markers.

I have a short excerpt from a song I wrote around October. Hope you enjoy.

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I feel like there’s too much space,

Not enough love, not enough grace,

To help me rise from my broken down state.

I’m tired of living, the same old stuff every day…[Read more]

Art critique, pls?

“I want to tell you Rhioe but. . . it hurts so much. .  you know?” Logan said.

“I know.” Rhioe said quietly. “It’s just. . . You’ve been so kind to me, and I can’t stand to see you look so hurt.” There was a silence, and Rhioe wondered if she’d…[Read more]

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The streets were dark as Jin was led through them by the two officers who had come to take him to the Tower. The sun was just beginning to rise in the east, but its light was hidden behind the dark buildings. His breath huffed gently in the cold…[Read more]

Back to it.

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Rhioe blinked hard as her eyes adjusted as Logan carried her out of Leona’s house and back outside. The dark gray clouds had cleared a little, enough for the evening sun to shine through a little. Logan’s shoes barely made any noi…[Read more]

Great, thank you! 🙂

I don’t know if it notified you when I posted it a little while ago. If you’re able to check, I believe it was on 74 of this thread.

If you’re not able to I can try reposting it again.

Hey, just a follow up on a question I asked a while ago, as well as a new one.

Would you like for Era to meet up with Pasha again?

And if you are okay with the role I’m hoping to give my new character Dither, pls let me know.

Thx.

Good afternoon all, Ember and I were talking this morning about some characters I wanted to add, and I had an idea.Now, just to be clear, this idea has been approved by Ember if y’all like it then we can keep it. I am not going to be offended if you guys don’t like this idea or…[Read more]

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“Logan,” Rhioe whispered, shaking her head, “I have. I can’t hold this against you, it wasn’t your choice.”

Rhioe let out a shaky breath and wiped her tears away with the back of her hand. She knew that even if she said that, he wouldn’t be…[Read more]

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Rhioe tried to offer a smile, but her lips wouldn’t turn upward, it was like her face was stone. Logan’s eyes were glimmering sadly, something inexpressible, this feeling she felt, what was it? Logan’s voice seemed to almost quiver as he spoke…[Read more]

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“. . . Logan?”

He was blinking back tears that he didn’t want to fall. Rhioe leaned forward.

“Please, tell me why you’re crying.”

“It went well from a government perspective.” He said quietly, “B-but. . .” His voice failed him.

“Jin got arre…[Read more]

Ri: *rummaging through his closet* I don’t have anything to wear, what should I change into?

Clear, from across the hall and beyond two doors: A better person.

Dark: Your boyfriend is dumb.

Cloudy: Ri literally got his croc stuck in an escalator and started crying,…[Read more]

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Rhioe was still sitting on the sofa where Logan had left her, but thanks to Leona, her ankle was splinted and the pain had lessened. The house was filled with a comfortable silence that Rhioe had soon grown accustomed to, when suddenly, the door burst open…[Read more]

“Rhioe is safe. I’ll do everything I can to make sure she stays safe. You can rest your mind on that,” Logan said firmly. His words were comforting, and somehow, Jin knew that Logan would keep his promise.

“Thank you.” Logan nodded slowly. He looked…[Read more]

I’m really sorry about posting twice. There was some sort of weird error on my end. lol. Sorry!

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Okay, so if Logan wasn’t upset before, he definitely was now. Jin watched with small amusement as the Captain of the Outopian police pulled out his radio and began speaking into it. Era growled, but Jin shook his head, and she fell silent. Logan t…[Read more]

Okay, so if Logan wasn’t upset before, he definitely was now. Jin watched with small amusement as the Captain of the Outopian police pulled out his radio and began speaking into it. Era growled, but Jin shook his head, and she fell silent. Logan t…[Read more]

Jin is being sassy. Everyone grab your things the world is ending!!!

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Jin stared at the Captain of the Outopian police, he knew there was no way out of this.

“Yes.” He said finally. “I know I am. What are you planning to do about it?”…[Read more]

Jin: What the heck are you doing up there?
Kirat, sitting on the table: I pay rent and I can sit wherever I like in my own house, thanks.

Jin, sighing: Where’s the spider?

Kirat: It’s over by the door, can you please. . .?

Ri: I live in constant fear that…[Read more]

(Jin, Rhioe, and Kenem race in the room half asleep.)

Jin: Is everyone okay? Kirat what are you-

Kirat: *holding a lit piece of paper under the fire alarm* Now that everyone’s here, I’d like to ask. . . WHO FINISHED MY CHOCOLATE MILK????

Kenem: I’m going to kill a thousand people and a…[Read more]

Kirat: *screams louder*

Rhioe: Should we do something?

Jin: Hang on, I want to see who wins.

Police: Where do you live?

Clear: With my mom.

Police: Where does your mom live?

Clear: With me.

Police: Where do you both live?

Clear: Together.

Police: Where is your house?

Clear: Next to my neighbor’s house.

Police: Where…[Read more]

I’m sorry to tag you in on this thread again, but I had a question about Reza. . .

Would it work if I just made an original character to take her place since she’s no longer a part of this? Or would you prefer I not? and just let Reza go so she doesn’t have to come back?

Just wondering because I’m going to have to write another…[Read more]

Kenem: Eating a family size bag of chips.

Rhioe: *eyes the very small bag of chips* Kenem, that’s definitely not family sized.

Kenem, staring into the half empty bag: Every bag of chips is family sized if you’re an orphan.

Rhioe: *tears up* Kenem. . .

Kenem: You weren’t there. You didn’t hear what he said to me.

Rhioe: What did he say?

Kenem: ‘What are you going to do, stab me?’

Jin: That’s fair.

Rhioe: Hey, can you ask Jin something for me?

Kirat: I would, but he’s not talking to me because I put ketchup in his socks.

Rhioe:

Jin, pointing at…[Read more]

Why am I surprised that you’re taller than me? Everyone is taller than me! XD

Rhioe, addressing her friends: Tall people: If we are walking together, please take into consideration my tiny legs. I can’t keep up with you. Please think of my tiny legs. I don’t want to be jogging to keep up with your leisurely stroll you…[Read more]

During an <b>argument</b>

Kenem: Scientific fact: The world around me is made up of protons, neutrons, morons and electrons.

Kirat: I used to be like “I wonder what would happen if I set that on fire.” and since then, I’ve found that more often than not the answer is “it’ll be on fire.”

Jin: Stop setting things…[Read more]

Kenem: I always eat ice cream when I’m having a bad day.

Rhioe:. . . . You eat ice cream every day.

Haha! XD Thanks for joining us!

Kirat (texting his manager): Hey, are we still on for today?

Manager: Yes. You don’t need to text me this every morning. We are still “on” for work every Monday-Friday

Kirat: Kenem? You’re here too? Amazing!

Kenem: Kirat?

Kirat: Long time no see! Man, it’s been ages. When…[Read more]

Beautiful!

Thank you for sharing this with me.

Kenem: Yote.

Kirat: Yeeted.

Kenem: Yote.

Rhioe: Look, I just want to know who threw Jin off the bridge!

Kirat and Kenem: *point at each other*

Rhioe: *sighs* I guess I’ll just go ask him myself.

Jin, stuck in a tree: IT WAS KENEM!!!!!

Kirat: Yeeted.

Kenem: Yote.

Kirat, watching Jin eat a sandwich: What’s in the…[Read more]

Great job! I love the lighting and shadows. (Something I always have to mess around with before figuring out where they should go).

ibisPaint X is indeed a VERY nice app. I’ve been using it for a year now, I think, and have finally gotten the hang of it. 🙂

I love the drawing and would love to see any more if you do them.

Kenem: Congratulation-

Jin: *slams adoption papers onto the table* It’s you. Sign here.

Would your character rather live in an underground bunker or something like a helicarrier (or some other large, air transport thing)?

Kirat: *turns pale* Live in the air?????

Rhioe: Kirat. . . it’s a hypothetical question. . .

Kirat: Still. . .  I. Hate. Heights.

Rhioe: *hugs him* It’s okay.

Jin: I’ve come to the…[Read more]