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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Any chance that gap year program is called Worldview academy?
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Lol I’m not surprised at all! He’s such a noble character. He befriends Pip and saves Faramir from fiery death! What’s not to love???
Haldir is the lead elf who guides the Fellowship into Lothlorien. He’s very sweet and I love him. 🙂
Also I LOVE YOUR QUOTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles in the corner* Quin is such an a…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Niarok
Niarok saw the man’s eyes squint at his mention of the castle’s motivations.
Right.
He hadn’t known castles had brains either, not until now.
We can get to that later.
The man nodded stiffly in response to Niarok’s request to bandage his leg, and he unbent his knee, giving Niarok space to work.
He reached behind himself and grabbed…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Rúan forced himself to breathe — forced control over his thoughts and his whole self.
In. Out. In. Out.
The man in front of him took a breath, directing Rúan’s attention to him, and said, “My name is Niarok. We’re all stuck in this place, and it seems to have a mind bent on torturing us.”
Mind? This place has a mind?
Puzzled, Rúan tried to…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@denali-Christianson @joelle-stone
do either of you know where Canon City is? That’s where I used to live.
also does anyone here like music by a group called Clamavi De Profundis? It has a lot of songs influenced/from LOTR
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Okay people. Halt everything.
WE MADE IT TO 100 PAGES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOO HOOOOO
Oh. Nobody cares? Okay. Bye-bye now…
Ooooooh a halberd??? Niarok’s gonna have some fuunnnn
No, I’m not a psychopath.
You know, I’m actually not confident in that statement now that I’ve said it… XD
Niarok
“If I had b…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Also, what kind of wound is this? Puncture, like from teeth? Or is it a cut from a blade? etc.
It was from a blade — a halberd.
Because this rp is meant to develop characters, we tend to write more in the form of fragmented fiction (Just write as if you’re writing a novel, but cut off at a tension point, like when something big happened or your c…
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Poor Niarok, he’s working so hard to keep all the idiots alive I love him so much.
😂😂😂😂😂 I know right??? I love him tooooooo I’m also loving his chemistry with Ayden. So amazing…
But he’s literally like dying inside and I feel so bad for him!!!
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
*rubs hands together in anticipation*
Finally! I haven’t gotten to write this side of Niarok since first joining this castle… XD
Also, what kind of wound is this? Puncture, like from teeth? Or is it a cut from a blade? etc.
Niarok
Niarok caught the weak man as he fell. The man wheezed, clearly in pain and bordering on…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Poor Niarok, he’s working so hard to keep all the idiots alive 😭 I love him so much.
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
That’s an awesome start! Just one comment that might make it easier 🙂
Because this rp is meant to develop characters, we tend to write more in the form of fragmented fiction (Just write as if you’re writing a novel, but cut off at a tension point, like when something big happened or your character asked a question.) So, it tends…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
(all right, I’m back)
“Please,” Rúan panted, trying hard not to cry out in pain as his mangled leg throbbed. “Water …”
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@denali-christianson Yay! some people think I’m a bit strange for adding Beregond in my top 7 favorite characters. Also, refresh my memory: who’s Haldir? I know I’ll have an “aha” moment when you say it, but I can’t place him.
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
HOW DID I FORGET BEREGOND???????????? I LOVE HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I’m like halfway through chapter three rn, although I’m reading a lot today so I’ll probably get way further through it by tonight!
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
(Ahhhh sorry guys! I had to go AFK for a bit — next time I’ll let you know)
Rúan sucked in a breath through his teeth, falling against someone unknown.
“Water …” he mumbled, trying to blink away the fuzz collecting around his vision.
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
And I find Denethor fascinating, but “like” is too strong of a word. I divide my time between pitying him and shouting at him.
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
My favorites (the first three all struggle for first place soooo…no order among those): Legolas, Aragorn, Faramir, then Sam, Merry/Pippin, Beregond. But Eomer and Gandalf and Boromir…aggghh
I like Imrahil, but you don’t get enough of him to make him a favorite.
@denali-christianson where are you in Return of the King?
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Niarok (part 2)
Niarok took a sip of water from his canteen, relieved to feel it was still about halfway full. The little river of water had frozen, and there was no way he would be getting any other fresh water anytime soon.
Ayden still hadn’t returned from the shadows, Yila was staring distantly into the fire like she wanted nothing more than…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
LOVE IT!!!!! Getting started the hard way… XD
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
that made perfect sense and was close to how I was saying it anyway. 🙂
That was perfect, but…but…DON’T LEAVE US THERE!!!!!!!!! (Jk, Jk, that was an awesome way to start.)
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