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  • KHALON

    “Really? Tell me about the academy,” Aydin said wistfully. He hurriedly added, “I’m from the south of Yerasht and I’m one of the crown princes, can’t you tell?”

    Khalon grinned uncertainly, unsure of the proper response.

    “I’m actually-not doing anything right now,” he said shyly.

    “That’s uh nice,” Khalon answered. He had never me…[Read more]

  • @inkhorn

    Khalon has cultivated the talent of knowing when to be quiet from the time spent with Cahira, my obliviously arrogant, emotional- and mental-wreck of a character. Had he not cultivated that talent, he would have been dead or at least an outcast.

    It’s an important skill XD Aydin is one of my few characters who has it, he’s used to…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    THAT’S THE ABSOLUTE BEST!!!! I literally laughed out loud that’s hysterical

    *bows*

    We need character castle memes, so much memeable stuff happens here XD

    Hahahahah, yesssss! 😆

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    KHALON

    Tall Girl gave me one last withering glare before turning her back on Khalon.

    “Don’t worry about Liorah, she has a big mouth and a sharp tongue,” Sleeping Guy said apologetically. “I’m Aydin, what’s your name?”

    “I’m Khalon,” Khalon answered shortly. Sleeping-Aydin seemed friendly enough. He wasn’t threatening…[Read more]

  • Aydin

    I was so done with Liorah. I was so completely done with her, she just insisted on being as difficult as possible in every given situation.

    “Could you at least try to be nice?” I asked, trying to keep my voice down but rather failing. People were staring and I hated being stared at.

    “It’s not just him that’s asking you that. We’re all…[Read more]

  • @mamaauthoress

    THAT’S THE ABSOLUTE BEST!!!! I literally laughed out loud that’s hysterical! We need character castle memes, so much memeable stuff happens here XD

  • @calidris

    that was actually completely unintentional!  I wasn’t even thinking about that when I wrote it, but oh my gosh it actually makes sense

    You’re still responsible for breaking my heart 😭😭

    Huh.  When I was first thinking about it, I thought he and Skia would both feel awful about it, because they’re no longer “useful.”  But that’s act…

    [Read more]

  • @calidris

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    RÚAN:

    “Maybe.”

    Maybe what? That I won’t sink as low?

    The young man squinted up at me. “Why are you so ashamed? It’s not your fault your village is immoral and crime-ridden, is it? So you’ve really got nothing to be embarrassed about. Unless it is your fault, and in tha…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    Khalon can make the first move if that’s fine with you. If what I post is not going to spark an interaction with Aydin, just let me know. Oh, and by the way, Khalon is no longer blowing his trumpet and has cautiously inched around Qatar.

    KHALON

    Khalon breathed deeply. He had not ten minutes in this place and was already b…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy that was actually completely unintentional!  I wasn’t even thinking about that when I wrote it, but oh my gosh it actually makes sense

    Huh.  When I was first thinking about it, I thought he and Skia would both feel awful about it, because they’re no longer “useful.”  But that’s actually pretty interesting!  Maybe he wou…[Read more]

  • @inkhorn

    That’s hilarious that you names one of your characters Khalon. And I would love to have Khalon interact with Aydin. I would like to see how he would react to a traumatized ex-assassin.

    Awesome! I’d love to see their reactions too XD Do you want me to make Aydin make the first move or do you have any ideas? (It’s out of character for A…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    That’s hilarious that you names one of your characters Khalon. And I would love to have Khalon interact with Aydin. I would like to see how he would react to a traumatized ex-assassin.

  • @inkhorn

    Okay so something really funny happened XD I was naming a minor side character (He’s just there to fill a background role, he’s barely a character XD) and I was running through a list of names and picked Khalon because it sounded cool.

    I had the faint idea that it sounded familiar but didn’t remember about your character until a while…[Read more]

  • Same!  I wrote in third person a lot, and I don’t think I started trying out first person until I wrote Saskia’s first POV.  It’s way easier to get into your character’s heads, but descriptions are harder, at least for me.  But that’s one of the beautiful things about this game!  It’s all about experimentation and learning 🙂

    Yikes!  Are you…[Read more]

  • @mamaauthoress growth is growth, even if it occurs at the rate of a redwood tree lol

    Aww man!  Well if SE ever lets you, I would love to see some!

    Idk Ruan, are you sure about that?

    Ruan’s quite physically intimidating, right?  At least, that’s the impression I have!  Something tells me he’s kind of oblivious though…

    Really?  I’m gla…[Read more]

  • Basil:

    “I … come from a den of thieves,” the man mumbled, eyes downcast. “I was raised in a village full of immorality and crime, the son of a single mother.”

    I narrow my eyes up at him.  He sounds embarrassed, no, ashamed.  But of what?  I thought all areas of human habitation are full of immorality and crime.  And isn’t it normal to be the chi…[Read more]

  • “What’s your opinion?”

    Nithel’s blood ran cold a moment when he heard those words, upon realizing they were directed at him.

    The dragon rumbled, “We should move on.”

    The thing’s presence was unsettling, but Nithel thought the phrase had saved him from answering. Nithel slowly stood with his new bag, sheathing his knife.

    “Noted.” Alessio looke…[Read more]

  • “Well,” Brendin said with a wry smile, “last time I tried to negotiate with an eldritch being, I lost something.”
    He motioned his false arm, the one that Alessio had noticed earlier and dismissed just as quickly.
    “Granted I’ve not had much luck fighting them either.” He showed the scars across his torso, not much better than Alessio’s sca…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago

    Malvat was never pulled out, but he also has no handler: does Malvat slowly become a wraith and descend into madness or does Malvat become the Castle’s avatar…?

    Of course, I’m oBvIouslY sweet!
    Jk! Love you, Sonicup!!

    *squeezes tightly*

    Whacking sibling good!! 😀

    IKR!!!

    yay!

    *Fred’s voice* It’s called recycling! LOL
    YES!!…[Read more]

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