Story_Guardian

@calidris that was great. Poor Quin is going to be sooo bamboozled, this is gonna be hilarious.

Everyone: WHAT’S WRONG WITH YOU?!

Shasha: It’s okay, everybody at home admires me too.

@rose-colored-fancy *adds to the mental list of similarities between Liorah and Skia*

EHEHEHE

Sasha:

She’s so pretty.

And strong.

She’s way taller than Skia, and her posture is way better than Skia’s, and she’s even wearing a dress.  I’ve never seen Skia wear a dress before.  She’ll have to step up her game if she wants to compete.  I sm…[Read more]

lol. I couldn’t possibly know who you mean, lol. Seriously, though. I was having trouble with the first quarter of my WIP, and something you said got me thinking, and I might have a change coming (and a huge rewrite, but if it’s better, who cares?)

Do! They’re good. 🙂

Poor Farran…that sounds marvelous! How long has he liked…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Oh dear, no! Qatar wouldn’t do that. It does get me thinking though…

I was just thinking because perhaps possibly some of… a friend’s characters might have done that XD

That’s what I would have guessed! I want to read that one soon, but I have to work through some other books, and I thought I’d better give Dickens a break. Ha…

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@rosecoloredfancy

laughs in standalone novel

But seriously though, that is an entire mood

Also, the idea of giving/taking powers is great!  Basil and Saskia are both super powered, and you know how op Sasha is lol

Although, his main powers are already gone by proxy of no longer having access to the Veil…I wonder how he’ll react to having…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

SO. FUN. yes! I have no idea how Qatar reacts to romance, so…hold on, folks, we’re going for broke! 😀

Okay, thanks for telling me. I’m glad I got her right. XD

Why thank you!

@rose-colored-fancy

Do you use oils? Acrylics? You’re a good artist!

It would have been amazing. Locran would have made everything so much…[Read more]

@mamaauthoress

is it … bewitched somehow, to clean the air you breathe?”

Nobody:

Not a soul:

Rúan: WITCHCRAFT????

I love how that was his literal first reaction XD

Oh my gosh, that’s an amazing idea.   Like, all of a sudden, Rúan has telepathy instead of elemental fire. Amazing.

Hm … maybe telepathy would work, since he’s not too considerat…

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@joelle-stone @denali-christianson

Chapter 2. Destroy it all you want, then tell me what tasted good! XD

Chapter 2

The next day, Abner woke to find the sky as cloudy as ever. Grey light streamed in, from an open window, and he stretched, yawned, and walked to the door, calling for his servants.

He endured the grievous dressing routine, and…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

OOOOOHHH this is gonna be FUN! XD haha you definitely got Evie right. At least where she is in life right now…

She’s 5’6, long brown hair, and brown, slightly hazel, eyes. Her hair is down right now, and she’s wearing a tattered muddy brown training dress, which is regrettable since she didn’t bring anything to change into……[Read more]

Oh dear, no! Qatar wouldn’t do that. It does get me thinking though…

That’s what I would have guessed! I want to read that one soon, but I have to work through some other books, and I thought I’d better give Dickens a break. Have you read Jane Eyre or The Scarlet Letter?

Ha! It oughta be good! Do you have any triangles in your writings?

@denali-christianson

yay! This oughta be cool. Let’s see if Qatar has a gentlemanly side, after all. 😉

Qatar

The girl froze. The eyes that looked up into his were big and concerned.

“You…want to kill him?”

Qatar looked past her, as if he could look through the rocky wall and into some other time when things were happier.

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Yup, you got it! Put me on the list. <3

Ahh, you’re a wonderful artist! He looks good and (this is gonna sound weird) actually plausible. What I mean is you must have a good mind-to-hand-to-another’s-mind communication, because his looks didn’t shock me. So you must have not only drawn him well, you must have described him well. 🙂 Hope that…[Read more]

@calidris

@mamaauthoress that was just fine!  Sometimes if a character dynamic lasts for a long time, the posts start getting longer, but that usually only happens later because it ends up involving writing little bits of dialogue for the other person’s character to keep the interaction going 🙂

Good to know. (:

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RÚAN:

The cont…[Read more]

@inkhorn

LOL I’m literally loving Khalon soooo much! XD

Evie

“What, no death threats?” the man retorted as soon as Evie had finished her sentence.

She flinched.

Thanks, Yila. Thanks soooo much.

Should she just walk away, or…

Khalon shook his head and stood. “I’m sorry. That was stupid. Gut reaction. My name is Khalon. It’s a pleasure…[Read more]

Niarok

“I’m a doctor. I didn’t mean to stare. I’m sorry. Although if you ever want to tell me how you got them, I’d be happy to hear the story.”

Liorah looked entirely taken aback by Niarok’s answer, as if she’d expected a death threat or a challenge. But then she shrugged and grinned.

“There’s not much to tell, it was Aydin’s girlfriend– I mea…[Read more]

@calidris

yep, and it’s always the same character, too.  You know how there’s that one character that you feel sorry for, and you have to give them trauma and you just feel so sad seeing them all hurt and alone?  But then it’s all the more satisfying to heal them and watch as they grow and develop and finally reach their happy ending?  I feel lik…

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Pia didn’t say anything or look up at Kallun. He squeezed her hand, knowing it would take a few minutes for her mood to shift.

@inkhorn

As for Khalon’s backstory, well it is woefully underdeveloped. All I know is that it’s not tragic, all of his family is alive, he’s an only child, and his parents are great. I might change some of those though.

Oh, glory be, we have one character who isn’t miserable!! *happy dance*

That’ll be fun to give or take powers. It’ll put Khalo…

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Well, YEAH!!!!

I liked Acyn!!! I might put him before Sahar, even. Though they make such a good team… I’d like to read them in canon (hint hint, lol)