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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
As for Khalon’s backstory, well it is woefully underdeveloped. All I know is that it’s not tragic, all of his family is alive, he’s an only child, and his parents are great. I might change some of those though.
Oh, glory be, we have one character who isn’t miserable!! *happy dance*
That’ll be fun to give or take powers. It’ll put Khalon in an even more uncomfortable spot. In my world, powers are just enhanced abilities. Khalon’s ability is fast reflexes (faster than all other people’s). I shall take away is only strength. *laughs maniacally*
Oh, that’s too cool! Yessss!! Take away his one strength and leave him feeling powerless! And if you really like chaos give him something else in return that he isn’t expecting 😈
I liked Acyn!!! I might put him before Sahar, even. Though they make such a good team… I’d like to read them in canon (hint hint, lol)
If you’re reading that you want to read it absolutely!!! *If that isn’t what you meant oops XD* I’ll put you on the list of beta-readers!
I did not know he had such a big fanbase XD (Three is big. It’s bigger than I was expecting. XD)
Well, YEAH!!!! of course we want to see your picture of Aydin!
I need no further encouragement XD

I don’t know if this is his final design, I might change it (again, for like the fourth time) but for now I’m happy with it! Something about it still feels off but it’s good enough for now!












