Story_Guardian

Isella

Isella opened her eyes and blinked. It hadn’t changed much: the world was almost as black with her eyes open as it was with them closed.

Where am I?

She tried to turn her head to look around, and memory came pounding back, through her temples and all across her limbs. They were stiff with the fall and the tussle. She shuddered at the…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

The story is about 91k long. (The shortest one in the trilogy, I’m already at that with book 3 and I’m still in the second act

Oh, I feel that. I have a small problem with having my writing grow longer and longer as I write. xD

This feedback is just about the biggest issues, plot, world, and character. So, let me know when you…

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@calidris

I’ll drop (literally) Conroy in this castle. His character growth would be stunted if he was with Khalon.

Here’s a quick overview of Conroy:

Name: Conroy Flinston

Age: somewhere between 19 and 22

Appearance: About 6 ft. tall; thin face with dull brown hair and eyes, light colored skin; has on a knee-length, light, caramel colored…[Read more]

@merieshenanigans Here it is!  Hopefully we’ll be able to get it up and running soon, but in the meantime I have some catch-up to do…

Also, like I said, absolutely no pressure to stay active.  I think most, if not all of us here have taken ridiculously long leaves of absence xD

@noah-cochran

All of that happened before I even read a single word. Craziness. xD

Ohmygoodness that gave me such a laugh XD I literally laughed out loud, that’s hilarious!

I’m assuming they liked it, considering how quickly everyone read it XD It’s awesome, the sequel is even better! And absolutely, the Audible version is amazing! That’s how I…[Read more]

@winter_rose

O_O

Ohhhhhhh that is a great idea. *applause and grins*

*racks brain for all of the devious charries I’ve ever met in movies and books*

*finally settles on my favorite idea*

We could do Martin, from R. J. Anderson’s No Ordinary Fairy Tale series. He’s pretty devious (like… most of the time when he shows up he pretends to be…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

So I’ve read some of the Letter for the King, but I thought you would find something that happened rather amusing. I requested it for purchase at our library, and as I was waiting for it to be delivered, my sister saw it. She then got it on audible and began reading it. My sister than told my mother, and the latter started…[Read more]

@everyone: you maybe guessed, but Isella is the other dragon’s captive. She currently has her hair in a part braid, so it’s mostly long, and is dressed in a shimmery silver-grey dress with batwing sleeves and a little train. the insides of the sleeves and places where the skirt is drawn back (idk the technical name) is royal blue. She also has a…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy @inkhorn Thanks! I’m really nervous about writing her, b/c I’ve never done anything with her before (never seen her, never taken her out to coffee, or even lunch)…

Yeah, “poor girl” is write, Inkhorn! She has so many problems…This oughta be really fun!

Quin/Qatar/Fedor

The brothers started toward Niarok, who lay…[Read more]

Pia rolled her eyes, “It won’t be my fault.”

Kallun shook his head, “just don’t think about it.”

(Pretty picture 😁)

“Me?” Eliana asked startled. “I don’t know about this… I’ll be the one to fall in the water. What if the vine snaps?”

Tears still slipped from Nithel’s eyes, but he felt Alessio relaxing. He gave the youth one last squeeze, Nithel’s head pushing against Alessio’s shoulder and neck, more tears falling. He pulled back, hands still on the youth’s arms, just enough to look into Alessio’s eyes. Nithel moved to where he could see them, if that means kneeling,…[Read more]

Pia used her pike to get the vine again. She glanced at Kallun,

he grinned, “Ladies first.”

“Not me!” Julian said hopping up the tree. Following K’Nika’s example he flew himself across and just barely missed the water with his left foot.

Pia nodded.

K’Nika grinned. “We swung on the vines all the time!” She easily hopped up to Pia and reached for the vine. The princess let her take it. The girl demonstrated how she wrapped the vines loosely around both hands several times for a good grip. Then she gave a run and jumped, swinging across the water. The vine was too short and would…[Read more]

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Heheh…

😅

Get a grip,

Alessio didn’t have any energy to react at all, but the world didn’t stop just because he had. He knew they had to get moving, he had to come up with a plan, that was the only way to survive…

It wouldn’t happen. His brain couldn’t process anything else.

He felt himself pressed tighter, enclosed in warmth li…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Do y’all think it would be more interesting if she appeared in all her royal robes or disguised as a man with a bow and arrow?

Royal robes, definitely. I think it’ll be much more interesting (and funny) if she shows up to a dragon in a dress.

She has a complicated connection to Time. When she’s interacting with time her hands glo…

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@emily-waldorf

I don’t know if this Castle is still active since Calidris made Room B, but if it is, I’m going to pull Quin and Qatar and Fedor out, and put in a new character.

Yep, it’s still active! I’m going to finish writing my characters sometime soon, and then I’m going to drop in Mejt!

Oh wow, I love Isella already! I love her ability, tha…[Read more]