Shay

@calidris

Sounds great!

And I think that Ehud hasn’t gone yet, has he?

@jared-williams @e-n-leonard I have one more character to do (this is going to double as his re-introduction to the castle), but after that I’m ready to move on!

I’m going to try to finish his tonight!

@jared-williams

I’m done with my characters’ regrets. After they’ve finished any interaction with Avin, I’m going to pull them out during the beginning of Saevus’s battle and plop Mara into the middle of it (she’ll love that).

You’re welcome!

@emily-waldorf

@irishcelticredflowercrown

@e-n-leonard

@calidris

@this-is-not-an-alien

@inkhorn

@ethan-leonard

@lady-grace

Anyone else want to participate in the regret sequence? Last call, I think…. ? We can draw it to a close soon…. if there isn’t any objections? … So we can move onto Saevus attacking the castle. (hehe…. and…[Read more]

Hello!  I actually had a similar experience in the last few months – I made a side character who stole the spotlight, and I ended up refocusing the entire story and making him and his love interest the new MCs.  It was honestly a great decision, and it really helped to simplify the story and make it more personal (I’ve had similar experiences as t…[Read more]

Np! Yeah see I have the advantage here coz half the castle’s writers are my siblings so I can just ask them lol XDD

*Me, who just read Saevus’ worst regret in the other Castle.*

Oooooh

I wrote this way too late, so it’s not quite as detailed as I wanted towards the end 🙁

As far as content, nothing is mentioned, but it is kind of a continuation for Kit’s first regret, so do keep that in mind 🙂

Valencia:

I’m back at the party, squeezed in a semi circle of people, tuning out the drone of conversation welling around me.  It’s…[Read more]

Saevus looked around quietly. So far, all was good. The castle seemed to be forcing everyone to reveal their greatest regret…information he needed. People like Abirami, he noted…they hated the castle. He could sense it from their thoughts. And with the information being forced out of them by the castle, he could use it…to use them.

That, combi…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ok thanks lol! Yeah I was kinda confused there lol.
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Miles started opening the door. Just as it was barely opened, some force slammed back into it and shut it. Startled, Miles leaped back. Inside he heard a voice say “Take as long as you need, no h…[Read more]

Of course!  I’m so glad I could help 🙂

So this isn’t really a theological question, but I have a writing related discussion for you guys involving modesty.

1 Peter 3:3-4

3 Your beauty should not come from outward adornment, such as elaborate hairstyles and the wearing of gold jewelry or fine clothes.

4 Rather, it should be that of your inner self, the unfading beauty of a gentle a…[Read more]

👍 tremendously helpful! some times we are our worst critics…. other times we are our biggest blind spots. 😄 thanks for holding the mirror up for me (so to speak)

@jared-williams

So… Okay. it’s hard to think of debatable topics cause many of us agree to so much. lol…

Haha, yeah

When a Christian dies, the common platitude is that he/she is with Jesus in heaven now. However, besides when Jesus said to the thief “Today, you will be with me in paradise…”, I do not recollect any other specific verse that…

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CONROY

I was confused. The castle was flashing pictures on the screen. The things seemed bad, but why?

I looked at the people around me. They were broken.

An ache tugged at my heart.

I shook my head violently. That was their problem to deal with. Not mine.

I closed my eyes and covered my ears so that I could at least block out the hurt.

At…[Read more]

These poor, poor characters…

ENYDD

I watched in horror as regret after regret was revealed, my heart aching with each person. They all had suffered so much.

And now the castle was opening wounds, making them relive the experience. Was there no forgiveness? No grace?

“Enydd Skovgaard, it is your turn to tell of your deepest regret,” the…[Read more]

@jared-williams I have a few thoughts regarding this!

So for me personally, I wouldn’t feel comfortable writing it, but I don’t think I’d have an issue with reading it, since I know you’re a Christian and you’re dedicated to following Christ (you don’t come across as lukewarm at all XD).

In my opinion, the more prominently God and the Bible…[Read more]