Sarah Inkdragon

YES I HAVE IT!!!!!!! Thanks!!!

I’ll try to sent mine tonight *once I’ve gone through your beta questions and decided which ones to steal 😈* I already have a slot of time to devote to reading it so I can’t wait!!!

@this-is-not-an-alien All right, I’ve send out an email. Thanks again!

Thanks so much I can’t wait to read it!!!

I’m absolutely certain I sent it to that address 🥺 Maybe it’s my email having issues again, can you send anything to fantasywriter2018@outlook.com? If not I have two other emails I can try!

@this-is-not-an-alien Thanks for all that voice explanation, and for your own example!

I don’t know what email address you were sending to, but my main address is itaylorclogston at gmail. I’ve not received anything from you at that address. Sorry for the confusion! I’ll send you a PDF since that sounds like it’ll work best.

Evie stared in horror at the dude who was literally about to let the wolf out.

Why? Why would he do this???

Evie snapped her knives back into their sheaths and drew her sword, wishing for perhaps the first time in her life that she could actually shoot a bow – and that she had one with her.

No matter.

She’d take the wolf out on her steel…[Read more]

You did great Denali!!

Oh, and now I have to remember what Malvat looks like. Whelp, in dragon form he’s HUGE (like Smaug size), with ebony scales, silver horns like a crown on his head, and silver eyes. His wings are both black, but his talons are silver. In human form, he kinda looks like Thranduil from the hobbit with his same dragon horns,…[Read more]

Oh thank you!! 😂❤️At the end of it I was kinda like “dang all our characters actually did all that here, huh…”

Oh that’ll be fun!! (*assuming Alessio ever works up the nerve to actually say more than two words to Bren…*) Bren’s been a really interesting character to read about!!!
Oooh bring him in!!!!!

Ahhh see all our characters…[Read more]

ehhhh idk what it did it came up with

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So I clicked the thingy that had your email as a link and then resent it I hope I didn’t just sent you four emails now XDDDDD

Lupa shrugged her front biceps not at all reassuringly, but she then seemed to get some sort of confirmation from the wolf before she nodded to him and motioned insistently at the keys. Alessio let out a low measured breath. Normally he’d be able to tell whether someone was lying or not, but reading the emotional subtext of animal’s bod…[Read more]

I just kinda…*cough cough* made up that term coz it sounded descriptive 😂…But it’s just this thing I keep seeing that’s cool and I don’t know the actually word for it but you shift your style or voice three times in the summary:
“He has created a dark and twisted strand in the cable of human existence, one that cannot withstand my caress with…[Read more]

@denali-christiansen

YES! I think I know what you’re talking about! Which was your favorite level? I got all choked up coming onto the Ark, too. It was so unreal, and so amazing and awesome! I think it should make it into a 7 Wonders of the Modern world list.

@rose-colored-fancy

That sounds like a good idea for Acyn. 🙂 Thanks for the info on…[Read more]

Lupa shrugged at Alessio as much as a wolf could and glanced at the giant wolf who huffed, reluctantly agreeing not to eat anyone.

Turning back to Alessio, Lupa nodded and pointed her muzzle back to the keys.

@this-is-not-an-alien

it has an energetic three-part voice-shift

I’ve never heard of that before! Can you explain what that is?

*I looked you up to see (also YES IT’S THAT ONE I READ THE FIRST PAGE BEFORE MY INTERNET DIED AND I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!! I wanna know more about that convict’s past and how he got into that situation and his internal conflict with his…

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@emily-waldorf lol Misu’s had too deal with all sorts of people so I think he’ll be fine!  I’m really looking forward to these interactions too, but fair warning – I don’t know how much longer he’s going to be in here 🙁  I have some other characters that I’m wanting to develop, but I don’t plan on pulling him out anytime soon, so we’re good for n…[Read more]

*a couple google searches and skimming over three sci-fi backs late*
The more I read over it the more I like it; it’s briefer than the backs I read in sci-fi but fits with the more dramatic/mysterious summaries that are getting pretty trendy especially in thriller and mystery styles in any genre and it has an energetic three-part voice-shift w…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I’M ALL FOR THE BETA-READS BRING THEM ON!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂

@irishcelticredflowercrown

*rubs hands in anticipation*

Let’s do this!

Evie cracked her eyes open, shaking her head against the pounding pain. That last portal experiment had clearly not gone as planned.

She felt at her belt for her knives and sighed with relief when the hilt of her dagger slipped into her hand. Her sword was still strapped across her back.

She rubbed her eyes and groaned. She officially hated p…[Read more]

Thanks my friends I’m not confused anymore (that was a lie) XD

So I’m going to go post on the other thread and then hope I don’t mess up too bad…

@taylorclogston

Thank you so much, this was super helpful! I hadn’t really ever heard of the genre of ‘spy fiction’. You’re right, I have no point of divergence from real world events because even though this is an obscure part of the real world in my brain, that’s never really presented in the story. I think I’m going to call it a spy fiction…[Read more]

@rusted-knight Even if that historical event has nothing to do with the real world history? The events in this book and the events that trigger a change in leadership in the country are not from the real-world at all. I’m not even taking a real world event like World War II and changing it to see what would have happened if we lost. (which…[Read more]