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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Jake gasped, coughing out droplets of water. He rolled onto his back, the blizzard had passed, and the distant sun cast its heatless glow as it sank under the horizon. He sat up, dusting a thin layer of ice off his clothes. How long had he been unconscious? The unfamiliar peaks turned vivid red in the fading light, and he brought his knees up t…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
A scraping sound pulled Jake into consciousness. After floating in a limbo between sleeping and waking, his gaze focused on a dark ceiling with little golden spores floating in the air. Where was he? Then he recalled the fight with the thrid, and a shudder went down his spine… had Paris found him after he failed? What would he do to him now? As h…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
So sorry for the wait! here’s pt 1 revised
You don’t have to do an in-depth critique, I doubt I’d ever publish this, and if I did, I would probably just make it a webtoon or comic of some sort. In short, just let me know what you think! Thank you for reading!
He’d never killed a monster before. Jake took in a breath, trying to ease his…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
BURN
Who sprung a leak to the Endless Abyss?!
“We’re gonna die Search! We’re gonna die!”
Search just clucked my hand tighter. “Not yet we aren’t!”
“And I still haven’t figured out what a dragon is!”
“We’ll be fine!”
“I don’t want to die without knowing what a dragon is!”
“I don’t either!”
“In here!”
It’s so loud from the flood I d…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“And I’ll call him Big Softie,” Leana’s brows furrowed at Alessio’s remark.
No one knows Father’s language. Leana’s mouth opened, both in shock, and to say something. Though, his translation wasn’t completely accurate.
But Alessio plowed on, looking at her. “You should braid your hair so it doesn’t get in your face when you’re fighting and…[Read more]
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
If you like superheroes, the Daredevil comic series by Mark Waid is clean! Vol. 2 gets a little weird for a bit (supernatural-style weird), but overall it’s really good! I also really liked The Defenders: Diamonds are Forever (which censors cussing).
To piggyback on @rose-colored-fancy‘s recommendation, Scott McCloud’s book…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago

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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
(Oof, that’s awful…)
“Mm.” Leana acknowledged, bobbing her head up and down adorably. Alessio bit his lip, turning an even deeper shade of red. “What if I…somehow hurt him? I mean-“
“Yeah, what if she hurts Alessio?” Alessio asked innocently, fidgeting with even more awkward/nervous energy than usual.
“Thank you.” She added a bit uneas…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
*Kimmi sent something earlier this morning, and… sees now it never went through* *grrs* *types abbreviated version*___________________
Leana had been joking about the biting. She tended to joke, when nervous, but always wondered if anyone realized it was in jest. Dom did…
She danced away from Alessio when he released her. But she didn’t…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Thank you! I’ll check it out!
That’s ok! I’ve actually been interested in seeing that anime!
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Cathy replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Oh wait…you said comics not comedies…
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Cathy replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
SPYxFAMILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
…Be it noted I’m only 2 episodes in so I can’t vouch for much but it’s hilarious XDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
If you don’t mind the F-word, UnOrdinary (webtoon) is a great series. My siblings and I all like it. It’s a personal favorite of mine. Most of the cuss words are censored and they don’t use the Lord’s name in vain.
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Cathy replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Lol it’s ok, I’m behind on so many things rn I totally get that XDD
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Search grinned evilly at the quip/question, while Burn shoved some writhing, squirming creature back into her pack.
“When the exes are fighting the kids get to play.” She laughed.
That’s nice to know, he was hoping for more context, he really was…
“Uh. Is that thunder?” Burn interjected, and Nathair glanced up. Then at Burn, oh yes he was blin…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Hades had decided to observe the conversation between Alessio and Leana. It probably was none of his business, but nobody was stopping him.
“I…I’ve only been a messenger.” Leana said “Riding a horse from outpost to outpost. I had a dagger, but…All of us knew it wouldn’t do any good, if caught. It isn’t really a stable job.”
A horse rider? That…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Thank you! I’ll definitely be looking into that!
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Rose replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Hellooo!!
So, I’m not super well-versed in comics, it’s actually something I’m looking into because I’m going to apply to a comic design course later this year.
But, I do want to recommend Haikyu! It’s a manga and an anime, the writing is AMAZING and so is the art. (That anatomy and perspective, BEAUTIFUL) I love the way the…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 started the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Hey everyone!
I don’t know how everyone will feel about this, so I’m sorry if I hurt or offend anyone as it’s not my intention — I’m simply trying to stick with my conscience.
So, I’m looking into making webtoons, I was wondering if anyone has any good comic recommendations because the only ones I’ve managed to find always wind up having random…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
But I DO plan on sending the stories! It’s just taking me a while.
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