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@kate *salutes back*

@r-j-karas *fastclap, confetti, cheering, balloons, candy, and a pinata.* Good work! I did notice that you didn’t say it was a fish at the beginning. I’m glad to hear that was on purpose. No wonder there were so few visuals in the beginning. 😀

@rosemarylouise I’m excited too!

Thanks, @chalice, @samuel, @rosemarylouise, @sesi, @r-j-karas, @kate.

Okay, so here’s the plan:

Tomorrow I’m going to rewrite the whole thing word for word. Changing things as I go, of course.

You guys can help by coming up with a new name for the fish. @chalice suggested Bocuse, after Paul Bocuse. @r-j-karas suggested Chef.

The question is, what would the human name her fish?

Also, since we’re changing the fish’s name, we need a new title. I’m thinking it should be something clever with a hint of wordplay. Any suggestions?

I’ll post the revised version tomorrow night or Friday morning.

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