Jodi Janz

There’s 2 PoV’s

There’s Joe

@daeus-lamb it killed it again.  So i can just put it in multiple.  It’s okay

@deaus-lamb is it because we cabby have more than one pic in each post?

I’ll try again.

@katthewriter Huh. Can you try again? That seems like a fluke.

@katthewriter The horses sound really pretty!

And sorry you’re depressed. : (

@daeus-lamb i hit submit to share my cover and MC pics but it disappeared? Is it a spam thing that took them? It was a new post

@katthewriter

great!!

@woverinerm @dakota i work with 3 quarter horses, and a paint Arabian cross.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Okay.  But I’ll probably introduce some of the characters first.

@katthewriter

So sorry you’re depressed!

I’d love it if you posted some of your work. 🙂

@taylorclogston

Lots of description and show don’t tell! (That’s like Daeus’ fav) You had some,  but maybe its just me that puts it all over?  Idk….

First week without my friend…

@katthewriter Thanks! What part of writing did I miss?

@caseybold Thank you! Glad to hear it caught your interest. Would you mind sharing the mechanical mistakes? And thanks for the reading out loud advice! It’s a fantastic technique.

@taylorclogston Wow! I was completely drawn into your story. Like I only meant to open the document and glance at it but ended up reading feverishly to the end in a few minutes lol. Some grammar stuff and misspelled words distracted me every once in a while, but the idea and your development of it were solid and captivating. Do you read through…[Read more]

@taylorclogston woooow that was way better than anything i could write! Pretty good!

Though.. you didn’t do much of my fav part of writing..

Hi guys.. not sure how much I’ll be on. I have a i guess contemporary series? Im on the first book but ik that they’ll be at least 7 if not more books.  The stories will get a bit longer as they go with more POV’s. It has all my fav and most worked on characters (mostly blonde traumatized cherries xD) but it’s not that great writing or…[Read more]

@wolverinerm

I agree! It’s so sad!!! But I’m hoping to change that. 😉

@jeremydvance Thank you for the advice!

@taylorclogston

I would look at repeated words within the same sentence or paragraph. I feel you are trying to do this for emphasis, but it comes off as a little distracting. Try to eliminate unnecessary words to tighten the story.  Press on in your writing!