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Hello everyone! It’s Michelle (AKA

Michelle Black @michelle ) I’m back from the dead to be with you guys here today lol  *dusts off dirt and moss then acts perfectly normal like nothing has happened* XD Some of you know me and some of you don’t. Sometimes I’m on here.. not really often. But hey, you gotta live, you know?

I tried to tag everyone I could think of but if anyone I didn’t tag also wants to read, please do so:)

Anyway I just finished my full length book!! Well to be more accurate, a chapter book for kids in 3rd and 4th grade. It is 5 chapters and 6k words and I would LOVE some feedback on:
– Flow
– Grammar
– Do you think it’s publishable?
– Does it keep your interest?
– Who is the most relatable character?
– BONUS – If you have a younger sibling in grades 3 and 4 please read this to them (or have them read it) and give feedback.
Thank you so much guys!
Here is the doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w9Tj5_RImpZl61iZAdlJ1uSYp5eRatp_1zkoRG-aoeM/edit?usp=sharing