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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Saevus stared at the wolf-thing which had just sprayed him with ice. Roaring out “I will make you my pet, beast!” He charged forward, swinging his sword. Abirami jumped out of the way, and Saevus’ sword swooshed over head and blasted into the wall, creating a huge explosion of rock and dust. One wave of his hand, and dust clear…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
And then I realize that Abirami is a wolf, not a human at the moment…
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Lol YES Totally within character, though maybe something more like “I shall make you my slave forever, scum!”
Saevus stared down at the fool who had dared start an argument with him. “I will make you my slave forever, scum!” He roared. He charged past Kit and swung his sword at Abirami. He dodged, and the sword s…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
There we go…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hope you don’t mind Abirami crashing your introductions…. but, no way would Abirami sit back and do nothing with such a dazzling, dangerous display (especially with the fire. hehe)
lol. Saevus is not going to like Abirami. hehehe. (Abirami transformed into the flying wolf – the aemirok…. so perhaps Saevus will…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
eh…. what happened to my post???
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@ethan-leonard</p>
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@calidris</p>
<p style=”text-align: left;”>Hope you don’t mind Abirami crashing your introductions…. but, no way would Abirami sit back and do nothing with such a dazzling, dangerous display (especially with the fire. hehe)</p>
<p style=”text-align: left;”>lol. Saevus…[Read more] -
Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Yeah…I know…I’m wondering if I can get it to the point where Saevus learns that the castle basically has its own powers, and he’ll end up challenging the castle itself lol
Saevus looked at this youngster long and hard. The fact that he looked back and didn’t look down because he couldn’t take anymore was shockin…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Alrighty thanks!
King Miles Regulus:
Looks: Tall, young adult, robust, dark-blond hair, blue eyes, a rough beard growing on his chin, and a very noble look.
Character: Noble hearted, brave, loves a laugh, defensive of others (like, will give his life to save someone he just met), and deeply cares about his friends and family.
will post…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
hope that works. if anything is out of character, feel free to change it. =)
An aemirok is a massive wolf with wings coming out of his back. His claws are like sheaths – the come down to a point, like normal claws, but then double back over the tops of it’s toes like miniature shields. It has a long lion-like tail, and it’s ears are slightly c…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
lol. lot happened in a short time… whew!!! Just fyi… fire sword breaking through a door, armored man comes through…. Abirami is going to be on high alert! …. meaning watch out! 😉
Grinning from ear to ear, dragging Ku by the hand, ignoring her constant whining and pushback, I led the group into the auditorium with it’s elegant tables…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Of course. Just post a character bio and a world bio.
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
CONROY
A woman walked up to me and gave me a small smile. I smiled back, making note of her curly hair, brown eyes, and how eerily similar her clothes were to an Extranei. However, there were multiple other people who were wearing foreign clothes as well. But then it could be to blend in. Or it could be to distract me the actual traitor.
“I d…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@ethan-leonard LotR is my favorite movie series ngl. And one of my favorite book series! Have you read the books yet? They’re kind of long and slow, but I love them
And I didn’t know that about his name, but that’s really cool! It’s not too obvious, but certainly very meaningful (also it just sounds like a good evil emperor name…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks! Yes, I did kinda base Saevus loosely off of Sauron from lotr. Yes I have seen those movie I love them lol. Also note Saevus is Latin for cruel.
Saevus entered the room, brushing past a young man. “Hey, watch it mister!” he called out.
Saevus stopped and turned to him. Looking down at him he scrutinized the young ups…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Kit:
I flinch as an explosion suddenly rocks the stone floor. I whip around to see a tall door in the wall violently erupt in a spray of blazing wood and twisted shards of metal. There’s a tall, shadowy figure looming in the gaping hole. I step back, kneading my coat nervously. He’s a good foot taller than me, and I’m 6’0…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Jade
Well, wonder of wonders. Who knew people could be surprising, or interesting? And here was seemingly frilly, shallow Ophelia doing a decent job at giving ballet lessons to Abirami of all people.
However, that was not nearly as surprising as Abirami doing well…that is, tolerably.
Jade squealed in shock when he swept her into the air as t…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago

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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I’ll start. I’ll set the stage, and then you bring in Kit. And we’ll see what happens.
Saevus proceeded down the hall. The hallway was long and narrow, with torches mounted at regular intervals on the walls. With every step Saevus took, his plate and mail armor jingled and echoed off of the walls, announcing the newcomer long before anyon…[Read more]
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