Mel

The silence was deafening…

Well, he hadn’t really expected her to have a lot of fighting experience anyway.

“I…I’ve only been a messenger.” She said “Riding a horse from outpost to outpost. I had a dagger, but…All of us knew it wouldn’t do any good, if caught. It isn’t really a stable job.”

Alright, she’d be used to the feel of a knife that’d…[Read more]

Alessio backed out of the embrace, but his hand still lingered on Leana’s shoulder. “We’ll need to decide which mirror to enter and come up with a plan to make it through alive.”

Leana nodded slowly, and took a step back. You said… the point of all the mirrors is to make us feel guilty? 

Alessio glanced uneasily at the chocolate guy, I should…[Read more]

Oh yes I’d love that!!

“I don’t know either.” She said in a nearly cracked voice. “I don’t know…”

Was this what it felt like to lose someone who actually cared about you…? That was numbing.

She was still speaking, softly, almost as if to herself.

“So many in this war, have lost fathers. Brothers, friends…” If there hadn’t been a war…would his father have loved him…[Read more]

I’ve been working on rewriting parts 1 & 2 so they’ll make more sense together and with the rest of the story so far, would you like to read what I’ve got so far?

You’re welcome! I’m so glad I could help!

Her heart relaxed, when Alessio truly squeezed.

“I – Sorry,” He stammered.

Leana didn’t pull away or look at him. So many things still rushed through her mind.

After a minute or two, Alessio spoke again, “I’ll keep searching until we find your father- I believe we’ll find him eventually, but if we don’t…” Leana stepped back. Alessio’s face ti…[Read more]

Thanks!!! (and sorry for the delay replying lol XDD) Your notes were super helpful and I’ll be taking a lot of your advice!! <3

He could hear her take a slow, painful breath. He should’ve thought of something better to say…not that it would do any good…

“Alright.” She said, as if taking in all the information she’d been given. He bit his lip, not sure if he should say something or just shut up for how “helpful” he’d b – Alessio flinched as a hand rubbed his arm, but…[Read more]

Alessio seemed in a daze, and Leana resisted the urge to fidget.

Finally he looked at her, biting his lip, “It’s possible if Nithel is still in this world…dimension…place…then he might be forced into the trials as well and there’s a chance of us finding him there. I don’t know.” He sucked in a deep breath, and Leana’s brows furrowed. “The…[Read more]

Lol that’s good!!! Well, not the confusing brain part lol XDD

Whichever one has more braincells this castle has a huge braincell deficiency. 😌✌️

Alessio nearly jumped when Leana crawled out from under the table – a safe distance away from them. Devisldevilsdevils was she listening in? That was stupid she would’ve hidden better if she int…[Read more]

“Alright, we’ll need to come up with a plan.” Alessio spoke, “We don’t have a lot of options and we don’t know really what’s ahead of us so we should be prepared for the worst. Our best option would be to work together and manage our assets and liabilities accordingly.”

Leana’s eyes widened, as she still hunkered under the table. Is it too m…[Read more]

I read it! I left some notes, i really like it and it’s really interesting!

@driving-into-the-future

Why not throw both in?

I mean, @ragnarok has a disorienting number of characters and it hasn’t really bothered anyone. And you could put one in each group!

If you just don’t feel like doing two characters, I vote the water-princess because there are already a lot of pyromanic characters here. LOL.

On the other hand, if…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien HIIIIIIII

Nah, don’t worry, it’s not as confusing as my brain. I’m working on choosing which character to throw in. It’s currently a tie between my highly trained, bad with emotions, water-controlling assassin princess, Adira “Bubbles” Achlys or the angry fire controlling princess Jaira “Sparky” Heba.

Alright and no problem!! 😁✌️

Ok! Forgive the unfinished 2nd chapter and the notes lol XDDD I should have another chapter once every two weeks or something like that…

The WIP

And please do leave any comments or critique if you can/want to!! <3

HII NEW HUMAN @diving-into-the-future!!!! Lemmie just catch up with everything!

So right now our characters’ve been separated into two groups:

Group 1: Burn and Search (@hannahrenner‘s) Caleb (@rusted-knight‘s) Miles (@ethan-leanard) Nathair (mine)

and

Group 2: Leana (@kimlikesart‘s) Con (@ethan-leanard), Arsene, Sherlock, Hades and Crorie…[Read more]

Okay, thank you! I’ll hop to it!

@diving-into-the-future

Yes, it is. Make a character bio and a world bio.

Hey, is the Castle open to some new visitors?