Grace

@literatureforthelight

Oh, that’s super interesting! I’ve never really thought about whether I was more prose or character oriented, but that’s a really intriguing thought. 😀

@noahlitle

Yeah, it was kinda a bummer. Oh, well…I guess the others were too busy. We still did amazing!😀 (Yay, for NEW WESSEX!!)

@cassandraia

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@literatureforthelight @noahlitle you’re welcome! Glad I could offer a little feedback. 🙂 usually I’m not very active in these. Or on here in general. Sorry. : I’m trying to be better about it.

@literatureforthelight

Thank you! And Great job! I can’t believe we got second place.

We’ll have to push ourselves harder next time. Like we did with the dream sequence one.

Good job everyone!

@bama-rose @eden-anderson @cassandraia

This feels like the smallest team we’ve ever had working on the prompt war.

Great job, guys!! Especially @literatureforthelight! 😀

@eden-anderson

Agreed. @literatureforthelight you did great!!

YAY!! Even though we didn’t win, we did a great job!! 💃🎉🎉 LONG LIVE NEW WESSEX!!

@literatureforthelight thanks so much for the time and energy you put into writing up the story for us! You did a fantastic job! ❤

@scarletimmortalized

Thanks!

I’ve always found Korean culture interesting, but I never did an indepth study of it. You should probably talk to @literatureforthelight because she wrote the short story. 🙂

@bama-rose Sorry! Just a little delayed in posting it. Here it is. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7fcU9bi72PoRIK6c3Iv-lpu8Ph1kjFsHJfTv2LLEJs/edit?usp=sharing

@eden-anderson @literatureforthelight @noahlitle @r-m-archer @cassandraia @germaine-han

@literatureforthelight

Yeah, I have the same problem. I’m horrible at writing emotional things, and so I also procrastinate when it comes time to write an emotional scene. I’m so scared I’ll just blotch everything up…

I think you did well conveying emotion in this story! 👍

@literatureforthelight

Man, it’s super good. And with that nod from Tae Ki at the end … it put a nice touch on it for me. 😌 Great job!!

Hey, guys. Sorry I’m so late. I made a few suggestions. I hope I’m not too late.

Looks good, @literatureforthelight. I couldn’t have written it better. The only thing I would change is the order, but that’s just my personal interest in non-linear narrative showing through.

I hope we win! (NEW WESSEX…[Read more]

@literatureforthelight

Looks good!👍 I think the flashback is especially well done.

Can’t wait to see who wins! (NEW WESSEX FOREVER!!!!)

@bama-rose

Okay, now that I know I am not the only one who has just discovered this, I don’t feel like such an idiot! 😜

@literatureforthelight

Awesome! I’ll take a look!

(Oh, and thanks for the links!😁)

@literatureforthelight

Looks great!! 🙂

I definitely see a lot of improvement, @literatureforthelight. Just one thing though – as someone who has a number of Korean friends, the English translation of their names could be spelled a bit differently. For example, I would more often see Eun-ha as Eun Ha or Eunha. It’s definitely up to the person, but I rarely see Korean names with an en…[Read more]

@literatureforthelight You’re welcome! I could maybe ask my friend about the titles if you want. She knows a lot more about Korean culture than I do. Actually, I have several friends who know a lot about Korean culture. Too bad they aren’t on here. XD I would definitely recommend researching more so that you can make sure it’s accurate.

I think I…[Read more]

@literatureforthelight

I thought it was probably a first draft and I knew you were going to change a lot of stuff by the time it’s ready to go, but I just thought I’d point that out. 🙂

Aghhh! Don’t ask me about titles…I’m horrible at coming up with ones. 😬 I think the title you have now is fine.

@literatureforthelight I really enjoyed that 😀 nice job! I liked the characters and the conflict, and as someone who loves K-pop, I appreciated it even more. XD There was just one comment I had about the culture and him being older than Tae-ki. See on the doc.

But I agree with @eden-anderson; it did feel like Min was too happy at the end. I…[Read more]