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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Of course! Let me know if you end up liking it I’ve had all three of those recommended to me. I’ll have to look into it. I didn’t really like the sound of Fullmetal Alchemist’s plot either, and I’ve heard that AoT is incredibly violent. But, I’ve also heard that it’s an amazing story with great themes and characters, so we’ll see!
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Sahar
The tall man glared at us and I smiled. He was holding two swords, and I studied them with admiration. I had only used swords once or twice, but I did like them. They were almost as pretty as knives.
”Well it’s lovely to make your acquaintance,” the man drawled, looking both of us up and down. “Sorry to be the one to break this to you b…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
LOL IKR!?! And Meira entered the story literally bowling into my MC and proclaiming he was her boyfriend to a buncha thugs she angered while he’s just standing there like 0.0! And now I’m so stuck with her XDD.
That’s such a Meira thing to do XD Poor Alessio XD
IT IS RIDICULOUS HOW DARE YOU CALL ME OUT LIKE THAT WHY DO YOU H…
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@irishcelticredflowercrown I’m so sorry I’ve left you on hold so long!
Of course! Let me know if you end up liking it 🙂 I’ve had all three of those recommended to me. I’ll have to look into it. I didn’t really like the sound of Fullmetal Alchemist’s plot either, and I’ve heard that AoT is incredibly violent. But, I’ve also heard that it’s…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
YES EXACTLY! IT’S JUST TOO PRETTY!!!! Lol, fourteen-year-old me was too busy pulling my sister’s rough anime sketches out of the trash and trying to trace them😄 (in my defense that was just the crafts trashcan, there was literally nothing in it but dirt, paper, fabric and thread 😅). I haven’t seen at all as many animes as I’d like (grrr, it’s so…[Read more]
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
So sorry about the posts not being all in one post! I just realized they wouldn’t post as one, bc I was trying to include a couple links, and they wouldn’t go through. You don’t have to reply to all of that LOL — its overwhelming, haha
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I can’t tell you any details about Ziyad because it’s kinda spoilers. He has kinda a tragic backstory so he has his…. issues. And because of character agency, that means he’s made a lot of really bad choices XD He’s honestly a mess, but he really tries and I love him for it. I think he has a genuinely good heart and good inte…
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I’ve tried in vain to like classical music, but it’s hard and I get bored XD I think my favorite is definitely folk, especially Celtic and South American. It’s just too much fun! My favorites are by Ortiz. (Oh, his books are for piano too! I have the International Rhythmic Collection parts one and two.) My favorite songs are Habanera Gris and D…[Read more]
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I’ve tried in vain to like classical music, but it’s hard and I get bored XD I think my favorite is definitely folk, especially Celtic and South American. It’s just too much fun! My favorites are by Ortiz. (Oh, his books are for piano too! I have the International Rhythmic Collection parts one and two.) My favorite songs are H…
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
So sorry, I have (once more) failed to prioritize correctly and completely forgot to reply.
The story of my life 😉
LOL, yes! I was playing a song I haven’t played in a really long time and I was very creeped out that my fingers were playing it faster than I could read (And I don’t have it memorized) and it was weird XD<…
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Oh my goodness!!! It posted!!!!! *elated happy dance*
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@rose-colored-fancy @this-is-not-an-alien
Hi!! Sorry it has taken me so long to respond! We went camping, and then my computer kept saying I couldn’t access the website, and then when I could, I couldn’t post anything XD So, let’s try this again! 😛
WINGIBY IGGIBY!!!! LOL, how’s your stories been, how’ve you been, how’v…
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Rose replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@wingiby-iggiby
So sorry, I have (once more) failed to prioritize correctly and completely forgot to reply.Yes, muscle memory is amazing! I love it so much Our bodies are so awesome, lol (but my mind blanks out on stuff all the time, so yeah . . . . )
LOL, yes! I was playing a song I haven’t played in a really long time and I was very cre…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Lorcan
Lorcan glared at the boy and girl who had just fallen from the sky, squinting through the clouds of dust. He gripped his swords firmly, but in a way that looked casual. He was making sure that they could see them. His father always said to be cautious when making a statement to others. Never look like you want to start a fight. Always look…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@this-is-not-an-alien oooh looks like we have a new bit of drama in here! I believe that Meira has some stiff competition, but since said competition will never admit that, I think she’s safe for now 😉
Which reminds me – I should probably get Saskia into one of these castles sometime. Preferably one that doesn’t have the Shrike lo…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Klein acted fast. Pulling his knife from the warg’s neck, he sheathed it. Switching to the rifle, he jumped to the roof of a house. He had done this so often before. Bipod down. Scope clear. Open optical connection. The HUD over his right eye filled with the new images. His third “eye” zoomed in on the pack.
A dozen wargs give or take in the…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@calidris lol she’d love that! (not the least because Shrike has a very similar personality to her crush in the actual WIP 😂)
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
LOL, Lorcan be like “I don’t care.” Narrator: But he did care. XD
Bahahaha you’re so right, that just about sums it up🤣🤣 my Lorcan is such a softie on the inside😄
I’ll leave Liorah in that mess for a minute so y’all can have your side-quest XD (Plus it’s just getting awkward and it’ll be fun to torture them for a while yet XD)
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
LOL, Lorcan be like “I don’t care.” Narrator: But he did care. XD I’ll leave Liorah in that mess for a minute so y’all can have your side-quest XD (Plus it’s just getting awkward and it’ll be fun to torture them for a while yet XD)
Acyn
I could now add “Procrastinated until I fell into another realm” to my long list…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Lorcan
Lorcan was only slightly shocked when the mysterious newcomer with the long black hair and the light blue robes emitted a great light that destroyed the gooey creature. Because what else was there to be surprised about? Everything he had ever known had literally been turned on its head.
He gritted his teeth as he slashed through each…[Read more]
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