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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
I think it’s time to change to first person.
KHALON
Aydin didn’t believe me, and he wasn’t trying hard to hide it.
“If you’re one of those whatever you call it, what’s your ability?” He said mockingly.
What had I done to deserve this? For once I wanted to just let the world know what I was thinking, but since that would probably be the last t…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
“well, sor-ry! You said you hated him; I don’t see what you’re upset about!” He fired back.
“Julian, stop!” Ellie scolded, “look K’Nika, we’re trying to get out of here. We aren’t sure how we got in here to begin with, something pushed us, and now we are just trying to make it to the river up ahead.”
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
<b><i>Aydin</i></b>
“That’s uh nice,” Khalon answered, looking unspeakably awkward.
I tried very hard to smother a laugh but it didn’t quite work.
“Oh, it’s lovely,” I said, grinning. I had spent the last six months as a prisoner in everything but name. Naturally, I was having the time of my life.
“About the academy, well it’s only for Blessed…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Pia whirled to the guy, “My father is no wizard!” She snapped.
Kallun lost all ability to try to calm her down. He could only grab her and hold her.
“K’Nika…?” He spoke.the girl watched him intently.
“Why are you back here if there is a possibility you could be recaptured?”
she shrugged, “No one saw me escape. No one believes that anyone got a…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
“Could he be the one doing all of this?” Julian asked no one particular
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Si me amiga 😀 But then, Hakan is such a good name!
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
KHALON
“Really? Tell me about the academy,” Aydin said wistfully. He hurriedly added, “I’m from the south of Yerasht and I’m one of the crown princes, can’t you tell?”
Khalon grinned uncertainly, unsure of the proper response.
“I’m actually-not doing anything right now,” he said shyly.
“That’s uh nice,” Khalon answered. He had never me…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Khalon has cultivated the talent of knowing when to be quiet from the time spent with Cahira, my obliviously arrogant, emotional- and mental-wreck of a character. Had he not cultivated that talent, he would have been dead or at least an outcast.
It’s an important skill XD Aydin is one of my few characters who has it, he’s used to…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
THAT’S THE ABSOLUTE BEST!!!! I literally laughed out loud that’s hysterical
*bows*
We need character castle memes, so much memeable stuff happens here XD
Hahahahah, yesssss! 😆
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
KHALON
Tall Girl gave me one last withering glare before turning her back on Khalon.
“Don’t worry about Liorah, she has a big mouth and a sharp tongue,” Sleeping Guy said apologetically. “I’m Aydin, what’s your name?”
“I’m Khalon,” Khalon answered shortly. Sleeping-Aydin seemed friendly enough. He wasn’t threatening…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Aydin
I was so done with Liorah. I was so completely done with her, she just insisted on being as difficult as possible in every given situation.
“Could you at least try to be nice?” I asked, trying to keep my voice down but rather failing. People were staring and I hated being stared at.
“It’s not just him that’s asking you that. We’re all…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
THAT’S THE ABSOLUTE BEST!!!! I literally laughed out loud that’s hysterical! We need character castle memes, so much memeable stuff happens here XD
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
that was actually completely unintentional! I wasn’t even thinking about that when I wrote it, but oh my gosh it actually makes sense
You’re still responsible for breaking my heart 😭😭
Huh. When I was first thinking about it, I thought he and Skia would both feel awful about it, because they’re no longer “useful.” But that’s act…
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
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RÚAN:
“Maybe.”
Maybe what? That I won’t sink as low?
The young man squinted up at me. “Why are you so ashamed? It’s not your fault your village is immoral and crime-ridden, is it? So you’ve really got nothing to be embarrassed about. Unless it is your fault, and in tha…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Khalon can make the first move if that’s fine with you. If what I post is not going to spark an interaction with Aydin, just let me know. Oh, and by the way, Khalon is no longer blowing his trumpet and has cautiously inched around Qatar.
KHALON
Khalon breathed deeply. He had not ten minutes in this place and was already b…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy that was actually completely unintentional! I wasn’t even thinking about that when I wrote it, but oh my gosh it actually makes sense
Huh. When I was first thinking about it, I thought he and Skia would both feel awful about it, because they’re no longer “useful.” But that’s actually pretty interesting! Maybe he wou…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
That’s hilarious that you names one of your characters Khalon. And I would love to have Khalon interact with Aydin. I would like to see how he would react to a traumatized ex-assassin.
Awesome! I’d love to see their reactions too XD Do you want me to make Aydin make the first move or do you have any ideas? (It’s out of character for A…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
That’s hilarious that you names one of your characters Khalon. And I would love to have Khalon interact with Aydin. I would like to see how he would react to a traumatized ex-assassin.
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Okay so something really funny happened XD I was naming a minor side character (He’s just there to fill a background role, he’s barely a character XD) and I was running through a list of names and picked Khalon because it sounded cool.
I had the faint idea that it sounded familiar but didn’t remember about your character until a while…[Read more]
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