Katherine Baker

<p style=”text-align: left;”>Tomorrow is the day everyone!!</p>
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@kb-writer

I think that’s an amaaaazing start! I can put more specific, line-editing-type comments on the actual doc a bit later if you think that would be helpful, but just to get the editing ball rolling:

I think the backstory would feel stronger if we knew what Tabitha’s job was. Maybe it was one she really liked and depended on for…[Read more]

Here’s the google doc page! Feel free to tear it apart. I know it’s not great, and if you feel particular plot points need to be rewritten I’m not against it. I’ll still be editing it too.…[Read more]

@kb-writer

I’m literally trying to catch my breath right now!

So here are some random thoughts.  I think this is cool idea and I love your thoughts 😀 This was entertaining and relatable and had a quick pace that I super liked.  The one thing I had a hard time with was following you through and understanding what you were saying.  Maybe this wa…[Read more]

@maddiejay As far as outlining goes, very well!

In regards to actual writing, that’s a question for @kb-writer. 😀

Beta reading discussion, round 2, by Daeus.

Beta reading is a great way to make friends, help others, and even polish your skills.

Today, I want to give you some tips so that, when you beta read, the friend you’re working for will be thrilled they asked for your help.

Anyone who harbors private opinions about why one story is better than a…[Read more]

I think you can go ahead, @kb-writer. 🙂

@kb-writer Wow, I love it! So beautiful. (:

Oh! That’s a great way to theme the story, @kb-writer! It works really well with @mckinley‘s point.

They’re upset for losing their job, fall into a bad group that tells them to steal, get arrested and bailed out by their friend–though they didn’t ask to be bailed out–and there you go.

@kb-writer yeah I agree. I was visualizing a guy when I suggested punching, lol.

Awesome points, @maddiejay and @mckinley. And that example was great, @kb-writer, and I feel like we should try to write something similar to that (though not necessarily that specific scenario, you understand xD).

You guys! We got third!! Excellent job, all of you!

Word war finals:
Avensbeck 1,650
Erekdale 34,946
Knapphollow 16,238
Meraki 8,183
New Wessex 17,978
Rillumen 11,595

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18

@heather-drabant

@kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler

@kari-karast @i-david

@donna-darling @kr-lalonde

@the-golden-light…[Read more]

Alright guys, almost finished. Don’t forget to turn in your totals tomorrow!

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18

@heather-drabant

@kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler

@kari-karast @i-david

@donna-darling @kr-lalonde

@the-golden-light @jennythefaun

@bekah @SamBerg0

@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley

@kb-writer

Its all good! Your guild master hasn’t been on either XD

I hope work goes well for you and we can all get to interact some more.