(Oopsy daisy! I completely forgot as well).

Slate crossed his arms, looking at Ruhanna (@jennythefaun). “Important business, huh? What kind?”

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer, @kari-karast

Slate rubbed the back of his neck. “Oh yeah. That’s then name. Thanks. Say, what are you all reading? My friend told me I should start reading more. I’ve never been a big bookworm, if you know what I mean.”

Name: Slate

Age: 26

Personality, friendly and outgoing, but also pretty cautious and world-weary.

Slate: Wanders through the bookstore scanning the titles before he sees the group in the back reading. Walks up to them. “Um, hey, would any of you know where I could find a mystery book about some Christie lady? Or maybe by Christie. I don’t…[Read more]

Sure! Thanks for re-inviting me!

This looks like it’ll be a fantastic discussion. I wish I wrote reviews so I could chime in, but in the mean time I’ll just lurk…

<p style=”text-align: left;”>Sounds like fun! I think I’m going to take a stab at a paranormal fairytale sometime this week. Thank’s for keeping g this going,and I hope I can get more engaged. :)</p>

Oh dear! I just realized I’ve also disapeared!!!

Let’s wake everyone up with a question: what’s your current writing project?

I’d love to do this! Sounds like a blast!

@jennythefaun

So far, I’m seeing 1 for me by @McKinley (I’ll bet by tiny margins) any others?

@jennythefaun

I should rephrase that. I know you wanted to make some edits, and didn’t know if you had done what you wanted to do, or felt you needed to get it done (since yours is pretty good as is).

@maddiejay

If no one is able to make up their mind on which story, pick jennythefaun’s. I’ve already had my turn. 🙂

@maddiejay, @jennythefaun

Mine is ready if Jenny can’t get hers in on time. Jenny, are you ready?

@everyone

Do you guys have a favorite?

@evelyn

You could even say it was…

A statement that promptly led

To a gold rush excursion

Of eager young wordsmiths mining

For a satisfying conclusion.

So tell me, are you pleased,

To see so much about cheese?

@evelyn

I love it! It’s so cute! In fact, it has inspired me to new levels of artistry…

Holy cheese

It might sound cheesy

To call cheese holy

But it has holes, complainers! Please,

I think it’s easy

To mean it fully

When you say you eat holy cheese.

@jennythefaun

That was amazing!!! Well done. You have beautiful prose and foreshadowing. And you used my disappearing woman! 🙂

The only thing I would do is give Noss a little more initiative. For the most part, I felt like he was merely watching and commenting on the events, instead of actively trying to find the truth out.

The easiest fix is…[Read more]

@maddiejay

Hmm, now you’re the second person to say the same thing. Guess that means I need to go re-write that. 🙂

@toklaham-veruzia

Oh dearie me, that’s a lot to fix. Great suggestion, though! I’ll see if I can alter the story to make that happen. Let’s just hope I can do all that in the word limit. I was already pushing it. I also just took…[Read more]