Story Embers | Kara Lynn | Mentions https://storyembers.org/members/kara-lynn/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Kara Lynn. Thu, 28 May 2026 10:20:40 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 8db3f96c5b4e95d1aec3a841acf18302 WarrenLuther04 started the topic June 2019 Critique in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59454/ Sat, 08 Jun 2019 17:45:25 -0400 wOw. I’ve … been gone for awhile. *ponders in a corner*

But I’m back! Hi! *waves excitedly*

So for my June critique piece, I’d like to present the third chapter of my WIP. *throws confetti*

Chapter 3.

Please critique for:

– Show Don’t Tell: It’s hard for me.

– Interesting-ness: Does it intrigue you and pull you into the story more?…[Read more]

]]> 0 6509ed6b95a169b12e6970c7bb2aea8c WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic December Critique in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/37825/ Sun, 30 Dec 2018 19:03:50 -0400 Urgh the tags didn’t work. *facepalm*

Here are the broken tags:

@allison-grace @bekks2017 @catwing @cowlick @enu @filewriter @lydia-writes @theinvizibleman @devastate-lasting @sarah-inkdragon @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000 @sageinthemeadow @kara-lynn

]]> 0 7db575cb7d3ff7f0427143d58d475f27 WarrenLuther04 started the topic December Critique in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/37824/ Sun, 30 Dec 2018 19:02:33 -0400 Hello everyone!

For my December critique piece, I’d like to present the second chapter of my current WIP!

Before I forget, here’s the link: Chapter 2 WIP

Please look for:

– Character Development: Am I still describing my characters well?

– Show Don’t Tell: Yeah… I’ve had trouble with that before….

– Setting/Worldbuilding: Is the setting…[Read more]

]]> 0 eeff42161cae2cb0b40249fd42c9b32b WarrenLuther04 started the topic Part 2: September Critiques in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/18724/ Mon, 24 Sep 2018 02:10:15 -0400 Hi guys!

Here’s the second part of my September critiquing piece: the first chapter of my current WIP!

What to critique for:

– Character Development: are my characters described enough? Can you get a good image of them in mind?

– Setting/Worldbuilding: How’s the setting? Even though this is early on in the WIP, can you get a fairly clear…[Read more]

]]> 0 942a6f515670db39730b5020ec84de11 WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/18701/ Mon, 24 Sep 2018 00:21:46 -0400 Whoops

@allison-grace @theinvizibleman @lydia-writes @filewriter @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @kara-lynn @sarah-narnathon

]]> 0 b2d56e92b88eb90c909656cb06339d79 WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/18697/ Sun, 23 Sep 2018 23:49:44 -0400 I just wanted to let everyone know that the link’s access will change to “view only” as of October 10. You can still comment on it here (why would I turn down advice XD) but you won’t be able to comment directly on the draft. 🙂

@morreafirebird @bekks2017 @allison-grace @theinvizibleman @lydia-writes @filewriter @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow…[Read more]

]]> 0 a4efacfd404fd891d52008ec508d04ee WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/18631/ Sun, 23 Sep 2018 03:36:09 -0400 Hmm… some of those tags didn’t work.

@bekks @allison-grace @theinvizibleman @lydia-writes @filewriter @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @cowlic @enu @kara-lynn @sarah-narnathron

]]> 0 3cd5e7315b9d583f9ce2bf8c56ffb71e WarrenLuther04 started the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/18608/ Sun, 23 Sep 2018 00:29:34 -0400 Hello everyone!

I am here to present the first part of my September critiquing piece: the prologue of my current untitled WIP!

What to critique for:

– Is it intriguing? Since this is kind of the “hook” or “attention-getter” of my WIP, does it catch your attention and make you want to keep reading?

– Character: Yes, the characters are supposed…[Read more]

]]> 0 d812d1f16238ca5ca4a80abbfc6acfd7 Sarah Inkdragon started the topic End of the Year Critique Challenge Piece! in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/16921/ Mon, 10 Sep 2018 17:47:33 -0400 Hello fellow Ereki! Today I present to you my September piece for the critique challenge–the first half of chapter one from my WIP, Firemaster.  *confetti*

Now, as to what I’d like for critique, I’d like to focus on three main areas:

  • Flow–how does the story flow? Is it easy to understand, or are there some confusing parts? How to the…

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]]> 0 91969adba218e2df2bfcb0f42f078a3d Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 16: When to pull back on conflict in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/14111/ Tue, 21 Aug 2018 17:41:25 -0400 Hey Ereki!

We’ve been talking a lot about putting conflict into our stories and how to do it, but now I want to pose a question: at what moments in a story should internal conflict (temporarily) die down?

Like action sequences, internal conflict rises and falls throughout a story; if it were intense all the time, it would feel stagnant and…[Read more]

]]> 0 24b2d3934fa402ae2e4b586e63903622 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic August 2018 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/14110/ Tue, 21 Aug 2018 17:33:57 -0400 @thetessinator no worries! It’s great you’re back 🙂 And nice goals for the week!

I’m a tad late posting this because I was gone all day tomorrow, but here are my goals for the week:

– rework my plot

– write a post

– make final edits for my short story

What about you guys?

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-…[Read more]

]]> 0 35e6bd972210286796a591e06f20c925 Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 15: Creating internal conflict (an article) in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/13458/ Mon, 13 Aug 2018 16:56:27 -0400 Good morning, Ereki!

Today I have an excellent article on conflict for you all. Well, actually, it’s Brandon Miller’s article, but since he wrote it when Kingdom Pen was still active, I don’t think I’m betraying our guild 😉

HERE IS THE LINK

When you’re done, share one point or idea that really stood out to you and how you’re going to use it to…[Read more]

]]> 0 045a88ed81f75dbebc7d4eb751335dbb Audrey Caylin replied to the topic August 2018 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/13457/ Mon, 13 Aug 2018 16:53:47 -0400 And here we are at another Monday (one of these days I’ll come up with something more original to say 😉 )

My new goals are:

– get a tangible plot for an idea I’m playing around with

– write an article

– create a Pinterest board for the plot bunny that attacked me yesterday

What about you all?

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @Th…[Read more]

]]> 0 6795ce45c79aada7b1496b8f0493df1e Audrey Caylin started the topic The Hobbit in the forum Story Analysis https://storyembers.org/activity/p/13363/ Sat, 11 Aug 2018 21:07:25 -0400 Anyone up for discussing and analyzing this little book called The Hobbit? 😉

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara-Lynn @Sarah-Narnathron @TheTessinator @cinderella_28_ @Jose-Cuellar-Ramirez  @The-Inkspiller @Karthmin @Filewriter

]]> 0 0dd534663dc91e6f9ca9fa2173640c30 Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 14: Showing internal conflict through external conflict in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/13051/ Mon, 06 Aug 2018 16:04:10 -0400 Morning, Ereki!

This week’s annual theme discussion is about how to show internal conflict through external conflict. Since internal conflict is so…internal, it often needs to to be reflected in a physical battle for readers to better grasp it. That’s exactly what today’s discussion is about: finding examples in books, movies, or your own…[Read more]

]]> 0 74b7422d637ef44b13d1c0d21e3fea16 Audrey Caylin started the topic August 2018 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/13048/ Mon, 06 Aug 2018 15:51:56 -0400 Good morning, Ereki! August has come ’round, so here’s our new accountability thread 😉

My goals for the week are:

– finish character arcs for my outline

– write a blog post

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara-Lynn @Sarah-N…[Read more]

]]> 0 97ff3bd545a8cc8f0053a66a9e906016 Audrey Caylin started the topic A Guild Survey in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12584/ Mon, 30 Jul 2018 20:07:23 -0400 Hey Ereki! (last notification for the day — I promise 😉 ).

The Guildmasters have been discussing how to improve the guilds, and to help with that, we’ve created a survey for you all to fill out. It should only take about a minute to complete, and we’d super appreciate your feedback. Thanks!…[Read more]

]]> 0 64a63438476383caf65e00295dfbd94d Audrey Caylin replied to the topic July 2018 Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12538/ Mon, 30 Jul 2018 14:00:48 -0400 Time to set some new goals 😉

Mine are:

– finish my short story and get it critiqued

– work on my outline

– finish a blog post and write a newsletter

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara-Lynn @Sarah-Narnathron @TheTessinato…[Read more]

]]> 0 ebb9bf91aceaca2bbd95c35223627ae8 Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 13: The best external conflict ever in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12536/ Mon, 30 Jul 2018 13:57:53 -0400 Good morning, Ereki!

I’m shifting our annual theme discussions a bit by focusing on external conflict, so for today, I have a question I’d like us to answer and discuss:

What is the best external conflict you’ve ever read/watched, and what made it so fantastic?

As with most discussions, there isn’t one right answer, so feel free to share your…[Read more]

]]> 0 6ccb8e9c27c96eb2d93dfb2d21b875ac Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 12: Break Week! in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12298/ Thu, 26 Jul 2018 16:37:21 -0400 Good morning, Ereki! This is the twelfth week of our annual theme discussion, and I’m beginning to believe that someone is stealing our time, because that went by way too fast 😛

But to celebrate getting this far, there aren’t any official assignments for this week. *throws confetti* Though if you do want to do something, you can add to the…[Read more]

]]> 0 8e136bdb1fb2cb3c10444de7344f8238 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic July 2018 Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12297/ Thu, 26 Jul 2018 16:32:58 -0400 This is a bit late, but better to make late goals than no goals 😛 So what are your goals for the week? Mine are:

– Finish editing a short story

– start an outline for a rewrite of a novel

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara…[Read more]

]]> 0 ae37f2f7fd0118764b4d1291e65eeaac Audrey Caylin replied to the topic A prompt war (Guild Wars #3) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12293/ Thu, 26 Jul 2018 16:19:21 -0400 @bekks2017 @sarah-inkdragon @theinvizibleman @lydia-writes @warrenluther04 @ajaj2000 @sageinthemeadow @cowlick @enu @kara-lynn @sarah-narnathron @thetessinator @cinderella_28_ @jose-cuellar-ramirez  @the-inkspiller @karthmin @allison-grace @devastate-lasting

*jumps off the back of a phoenix* I’m finally back! And guys…

OUR SUBMISSION IS…[Read more]

]]> 0 5c7f3a639314f4178a4f0ffe10bfbe93 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic They did it again in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12292/ Thu, 26 Jul 2018 16:19:14 -0400 @bekks2017 @sarah-inkdragon @theinvizibleman @lydia-writes @warrenluther04 @ajaj2000 @sageinthemeadow @cowlick @enu @kara-lynn @sarah-narnathron @thetessinator @cinderella_28_ @jose-cuellar-ramirez  @the-inkspiller @karthmin @allison-grace @devastate-lasting

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Congrats, Avensers! 😀 😀 😀

We Ereki will beat you next time 😉

]]> 0 214d3d8ba51ee7b3561e2b706abf0851 Jane Maree replied to the topic A prompt war (Guild Wars #3) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/12038/ Mon, 23 Jul 2018 23:24:29 -0400 @allison-grace
@bekks2017
@sarah-inkdragon
@morreafirebird
@theinvizibleman
@lydia-writes
@devastate-lasting
@warrenluther04
@ajaj2000
@sageinthemeadow
@cowlick
@enu
@kara-lynn
@sarah-narnathron
@thetessinator
@cinderella_28_
@jose-cuellar-ramirez
@the-inkspiller
@karthmin

I’ve sent your submission in! Audrey or I will be back with the results as…[Read more]

]]> 0 eeed5ec5b846d509edba5958c1debd90 Jane Maree replied to the topic A prompt war (Guild Wars #3) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/11784/ Fri, 20 Jul 2018 01:22:01 -0400 @allison-grace
@bekks2017
@sarah-inkdragon
@morreafirebird
@theinvizibleman
@lydia-writes
@devastate-lasting
@warrenluther04
@ajaj2000
@sageinthemeadow
@cowlick
@enu
@kara-lynn
@sarah-narnathron
@thetessinator
@cinderella_28_
@jose-cuellar-ramirez
@the-inkspiller
@karthmin

Just dropping in here for Audrey to remind you that the deadline is coming…[Read more]

]]> 0 52aa7f823460ebd94e9a916dc8850467 Allison Grace replied to the topic A prompt war (Guild Wars #3) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/11599/ Tue, 17 Jul 2018 13:57:10 -0400 I have finished! Tear it apart! 😛

I’m a bit worried the ending is meh.…[Read more]

]]> 0 b9e22c3cd5d3ce653b2ec1948957973a Audrey Caylin replied to the topic July 2018 Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/11513/ Mon, 16 Jul 2018 14:00:04 -0400 Hey, Ereki! 😀 How did your goals for last week go? What are your new goals?

Mine are (is):

– finish tweaking my outline, or at least get halfway done with it before Thursday

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara-Lynn @Sarah-N…[Read more]

]]> 0 e6dedda676ed8563b0cde4e68ecc566b Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 11: Antagonists creating internal conflict in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/11511/ Mon, 16 Jul 2018 13:56:00 -0400 Happy Monday, Ereki!

I have a quick announcement before I post our annual theme discussion: I’m on the road driving (30 hours) to Realm Makers conference and back, so I won’t be on here that much until after the 25th. However, Pizza Ninja and Guildmaster @jane-maree is going to be popping in for me every now and then, so be sure to welcome her…[Read more]

]]> 0 b84c23aec3fe7ea71749dea38a7227d9 Allison Grace replied to the topic A prompt war (Guild Wars #3) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/11470/ Sun, 15 Jul 2018 19:30:06 -0400 I started writing! What do you think so…[Read more]

]]> 0 b728de04934b7411bd78e8079e454711 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic A prompt war (Guild Wars #3) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/11327/ Fri, 13 Jul 2018 02:53:51 -0400 @devastate-lasting that could work, though we’d want to make sure the judge of the guild wars doesn’t think they’re typos. 😉

It seems like we’ve had some good ideas coming…like the child being unusual, a little boy, and having the scene have something to do with life and death. Any further ideas? And it sounds like @allison-grace is going to…[Read more]

]]> 0 04d60d2b880e8bff9b36bb730afd2072 Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 10: Character flaws in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10985/ Tue, 10 Jul 2018 02:43:22 -0400 Good evening, Ereki!

As a quick note to our new guild members: you’re welcome to go back to the other annual theme discussions and do the assignments. Just tag me and I’ll check out your results 🙂

Inspiration for this week’s annual theme discussion came from 2 Corinthians 12:7-9, where Paul tells of when he begged God to take away his weakness.…[Read more]

]]> 0 8c18499877bd6f231f4613b077a3afe6 Audrey Caylin started the topic A prompt war (Guild Wars #3) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10935/ Mon, 09 Jul 2018 20:14:32 -0400 A have an announcement: we are at war…again. And since Avensbeck has won twice since the guild wars began, we can’t let them win again 😉

Here are the rules:

– This is a prompt war, which means we’ll be given a writing prompt and must write something based on that prompt (clean and under 2500 words).

– This is a team event, so as many peopl…[Read more]

]]> 0 36b935de940af9434223cf6091305d86 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic July 2018 Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10898/ Mon, 09 Jul 2018 16:27:48 -0400 Happy Monday, Ereki 😀 Did you complete your goals for last week? What are your new ones? Mine are:

– Polish my short story

– Tweak my novel’s outline so I can begin edits

– Maybe write an article

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@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick…[Read more]

]]> 0 9ad3317e689c9406db07b041ca481f08 Audrey Caylin started the topic Writing Conferences in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10843/ Sat, 07 Jul 2018 23:53:22 -0400 ‘Tis the season for writing conferences, so I thought I’d start up a thread about them 😀 Have you been to a writing conference before, or are you going to one this year? Which one? Are you planning on pitching your novel, or have you done so in the past?

I’m heading off to my second writing conference in St. Louis in a few weeks — Realm Makers.…[Read more]

]]> 0 a8fb79e462956a030b6cef6edb50de9e Audrey Caylin replied to the topic New Ereki in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10726/ Thu, 05 Jul 2018 20:11:29 -0400 Good afternoon, everyone! Today we have two new Ereki joining us, so please give a warm welcome to @the-inkspiller and @karthmin . I’m super excited to have you guys in the guild 😀 Feel free to ask questions and jump in to any topic. I already tagged you on the welcome post 😉

@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-wri…[Read more]

]]> 0 e56beecb7272abf078a9c5c4f360206a Audrey Caylin started the topic 2018 Week 9: Conflicting needs (an article) in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10406/ Tue, 03 Jul 2018 00:24:26 -0400 Good evening, Ereki! Today’s annual theme discussion is a bit shorter than normal: there’s an excellent article on conflict by K.M. Weiland that I want us to read. It really highlights how to write killer conflict and what that looks like.

HERE’S THE LINK

It should only take you a minute or two to read. When you’re done, check to see that you’re…[Read more]

]]> 0 3ab9b1c2af86b4f69cdd7bd9a8a787ac Audrey Caylin started the topic July 2018 Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10365/ Mon, 02 Jul 2018 20:28:12 -0400 Aaand, here we are in July! I actually did fairly well with my goals last week, completing all but two of them 😀 My goals for this week are:

– edit my new short story like crazy

– begin reading through my novel

– …or decide on a new project 😉

 

How did your goals for last week go? What are your new ones?

@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allis…[Read more]

]]> 0 d6ed6fdf64739f90a0ac37bde24b965d Sarah Inkdragon started the topic The Ereki Notebook in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/10260/ Sat, 30 Jun 2018 16:49:32 -0400 Hello everyone! Inkdragon here. Anyhow, I thought it would be cool to make a kind of Ereki notebook, where we can post random pieces of writing/inspiration, cool quotes, bits of things inspired by lyrics/art, funny things, poems, writing tips, etc. It’s kind of like that one word doc you have that’s got a ton of random things on it that all sound…[Read more]

]]> 0 ba188efda7ea29e736cabc70efbda550 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Week 8: Internal conflict and ghosts (aka backstory) in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9816/ Mon, 25 Jun 2018 18:03:15 -0400 @Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara-Lynn @Sarah-Narnathron @TheTessinator @cinderella_28 @Jose-Cuellar-Ramirez

]]> 0 a5ffa5856f4129de2b3d8565c2463127 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic June 2018 Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9814/ Mon, 25 Jun 2018 17:48:32 -0400 Happy Monday, Ereki! How did your goals for last week go? I did okay with mine despite a crazy week 😛 My new goals are:

– Polish my short story and actually submit it

– write and edit my other short story

– begin reading through my novel again

@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenL…[Read more]

]]> 0 3c95a80d3535fb4cbfac460cf9caa3a7 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Time to write a death scene *evil laughter* (Guild Wars #2) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9266/ Tue, 19 Jun 2018 17:52:30 -0400 *drumroll* The results from the guild wars have arrived….

I’m sorry to say we didn’t win (Avensbeck did), but we did a great job with our prompt and I’m certain we grew as writers while writing it, and that’s what counts 🙂 On that note, all of the prompts are compiled here: …[Read more]

]]> 0 a2770a738b36f67d9b6c1c82c73fc1ad Audrey Caylin started the topic New Ereki in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9185/ Tue, 19 Jun 2018 01:44:55 -0400 I have some awesome news: we have three new Ereki joining us today! Please welcome @TheTessinator , @cinderella_28 , and @Jose-Cuellar-Ramirez ! I’m excited to have you guys and don’t hesitate to ask questions and jump into any topic 😀 (I also tagged you in the Welcome to Erekdale post)

@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan…[Read more]

]]> 0 b4d7ebfc190989e742998e91ef741df1 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Weeek 7: Is there such thing as too much conflict? in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9149/ Mon, 18 Jun 2018 18:14:11 -0400 @Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara-Lynn @Sarah-Narnathron

]]> 0 eb7abe9c0cac36acc14a5b44044545fb Audrey Caylin replied to the topic June 2018 Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9139/ Mon, 18 Jun 2018 16:49:25 -0400 How’d everyone do last week for their goals? I only met two of mine, but I’m pleased with the progress I made 😀

My goals for this week are:

– Completely finish my short story and submit it

– Figure out what I’m submitting said short story for 😛

– Outline another short story

– Work on organizing notes for my novel if I have…[Read more]

]]> 0 06109c2fa6c3fb72f183ef7845e9a384 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Time to write a death scene *evil laughter* (Guild Wars #2) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9138/ Mon, 18 Jun 2018 16:46:10 -0400 @sarah-narnathron I agree, but I’ll see if anyone else has suggestions 🙂

Just a couple hours left until I’m going to submit it! What about Twenty Times for a title, since Camreigh re-lived that part of his life twenty times?

@Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sa…[Read more]

]]> 0 2d0c369fe60c4bf39b6d9dc5b799dd2f Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Time to write a death scene *evil laughter* (Guild Wars #2) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/9114/ Mon, 18 Jun 2018 02:10:26 -0400 We’re so close to the end of this guild war! I just went over our submission again and I think it’s epic. 😀  It’s due tomorrow morning, so we’ll have time to proofread it then. 🙂 Also, it isn’t necessary, but we’re allowed to give our submission a title. Sage mentioned putting a Bible verse at the end as well. Any thoughts/ideas on those two…[Read more]

]]> 0 bc88f71e848c2b50ca21aca797407f55 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic The Building of Erekdale in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/8980/ Fri, 15 Jun 2018 18:51:56 -0400 *alights on a phoenix* I come bearing exciting news 😉

First off, I have created a google doc where we can consolidate all the ideas we’re coming up with. I think brainstorming will work best in this forum thread, but once we’ve all agreed upon something (like being called Ereki) we can put it in the document. The only thing that isn’t there…[Read more]

]]> 0 8bda6938455741df79c031a5e2c776c1 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Time to write a death scene *evil laughter* (Guild Wars #2) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/8976/ Fri, 15 Jun 2018 18:21:31 -0400 Alright, Ereki! We have a couple days left to finish up our submission for the guild war. If you all could find some time to make some final suggestions today, we can proofread it and submit it on Sunday night. Here’s the document one more time. We’re so close to finishing! 😀

@Devastate-Lasting if you get some final suggestions by tonight, will…[Read more]

]]> 0 6458b83850f5b798e61c07a22f6aa8e9 Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Time to write a death scene *evil laughter* (Guild Wars #2) in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/8803/ Wed, 13 Jun 2018 00:13:28 -0400 *pops in* Just as a quick reminder, I think it would be best to finish all the larger edits by Thursday or Friday so we can do some final polishing over the weekend. @devastate-lasting will need time to make edits, so if you all could try to give some feedback soon, she’ll have more time to implement it. 🙂

I’m very excited about this piece and I…[Read more]

]]> 0 a9c8e77e679826b5a5c24390ec8de78c Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Week 6: Strategies for creating conflict (ongoing topic) in the forum Annual Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/8684/ Mon, 11 Jun 2018 23:59:16 -0400 @Bekks2017 @Sarah-Inkdragon @Allison-Grace @TheInviZibleMan @lydia-writes @Filewriter @Devastate-Lasting @WarrenLuther04 @ajaj2000 @Sageinthemeadow @cowlick @ENU @Kara-Lynn @Sarah-Narnathron

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