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Hello everyone!

I am here to present the first part of my September critiquing piece: the prologue of my current untitled WIP!

What to critique for:

– Is it intriguing? Since this is kind of the “hook” or “attention-getter” of my WIP, does it catch your attention and make you want to keep reading?

– Character: Yes, the characters are supposed to be mysterious. But are they well-described? If not, can you add suggestions on how to add description?

– Plot: Does the story flow?

Here’s the link: WIP Prologue

It’s set to Comment-only access, so you should be able to leave comments.

Thanks!

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