Adrelle

K’Nika climbed In the small tree nearby, partial to sleeping in a tree than the ground. Kallun stayed sitting by the fire, poking at it with a stick.

@jared-williams
That’s fine! And I’m glad I got Ku’aya’s reaction right. 🙂

I’ll write Enydd’s reaction to the trap tomorrow. It should be fun. *evil grin*

 

Haha! great job! that is such a Ku reaction. Sorry I didn’t include it in my post… I was writing my post while you were posting, so I didn’t see it until after I posted mine… hope that’s okay.

“That it has,” Ellie agreed.

Julian got down on the ground and felt around a little bit to make sure the grass was dry, then laid down resting his head against the log.

haha. sorry. dichotomy means two things that are in contrast. usually, big brother characters are side characters, not the main protagonist… though there are exceptions. so I just used dichotomy to highlight that although he is the protagonist, he is also the big brother character of the story.

haha. this made me laugh.

 

Abirami

Ku was…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Oh, thank goodness! She needs to live a life filled with joy and peace and…other good, wonderful things. XD

 

ENYDD

The shocked energy that had been flooding me suddenly drained away. I was stuck in a room with strangers from different worlds. From different worlds! And, clearly, I was the most defenseless of them all. I…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Wow your chapter was so good! I feel like you got the hang of Daire too XD

@jared-williams

I love love love Ku’aya already! Her thoughts on Lorcan were hilarious!!

 

Lorcan

The girl gave him a gracious smile. “I’m perfectly well, thank you.”

There was a long pause between them. “Daire told me your name was Lorcan.”…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Mr.Trip Williams wrote:
I tried to pour everything you’d want in a big brother into him… which is an interesting dichotomy, since he’s my protagonist. =) Great job on the post!
Why is it a dichotomy? Don’t people like big-brother protagonists?

Mr.Trip Williams wrote:
Oh, that’s awesome. I wouldn’t worry about consideri…[Read more]

Why is it a dichotomy? Don’t people like big-brother protagonists?

Thanks! I’m afraid I can’t tell you any more about the heartbeat of eternity, because it’s not something I’ve thought out, lol. I was reminded of one line in a poem by Rupert Brooke: [underlined]

And think, this heart, all evil shed away,

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haha! so do I!!! Let me know if you find one!

You know, I wondered that myself, but at the same time… I didn’t change it because the young buck circled the ground at its feet, but it also circled the ground where the saliero’s feet had just been……. so if it is read one way or the other, I figured it was still accurate….

haha.…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Hi! *tries to speak in other languages* *remembers she doesn’t know any other languages* Um… hi again? (pretend I’m speaking in Spanish, okay? Just for the sake of me trying to copy you. 😂)

Frankly, I’m still trying to figure out what I write. But I mainly write fantasy right now. I’m working on editing my first…[Read more]

@annabelle-batie

Hi and welcome!

Hallo und willkommen!

Hej och välkommen!

Hola y Bienvenido!

 

What do you write?

@annabelle-batie,

Awesome! Best of luck. 😉

@joelle-stone

LOL, okay, I’m glad I wasn’t intruding. I can help critique… which’ll probably mean reading through the last few pages of messages. XD I’ll read through them sometime today!

@jared-williams,

WOW. Just… WOW. You have this sense of humor running throughout, and each of the characters are so different that they’re easy to tell apart, though each are relatable too. Your prose is exquisite, and your worldbuilding is incredible!! Which means I need a picture of the tannik’esh. Like now. XD

One word of critique:

I looked…

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@annabelle-batie,

OH NO A STAALLLKKKEEERRR!!! *runs in terror*

Jk. 😛 Glad to see you over here! *waves*

Um… mind if I join in the conversation? Sorry if I’m like way too late for that…

I also don’t feel like reading through 27 pages of this, so could somebody update me on what is being talked about now?

Nope, not at all! Anyone is welcome…[Read more]

Aha, yes I did! Thanks for tagging me! *darts over to read*

@crazywriter,

The plan is to be done with Ch. 4 by next week! 🙂

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With shouts of triumph, the fort’s defenders welcomed the reinforcements. It took the company of almost 500 men more than an hour to get inside the fort, simply because of the narrow gate, and the many wagons of supplies.

Major Maguire led the column, but broke away to s…[Read more]

Hi everyone!

Um… mind if I join in the conversation? Sorry if I’m like way too late for that…

I also don’t feel like reading through 27 pages of this, so could somebody update me on what is being talked about now?

Hi, @joelle-stone! *waves* If you think I’m stalking you, then that is not on purpose. XD You just happen to appear everywhere I am.

@inkhorn

Bwahahahaha no! I mean, no, I won’t tell you. ::D grins evilly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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