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Catherine Roche replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
Alright… I did my best, and I have to go for the night now. Great job, everyone! @julia, thank you for writing the first draft! @steward-of-the-pen @emily-d @jane-maree @everyone-who-edited Thank you for your help! We did well!
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
SO PARIMIS, we only have two days left to complete the edits and polish the story. I think it has potential, but it needs to be spiced up a bit, especially the parts with Leonardo and Mona Lisa. If any of you could take a look at it and make suggestions about how we can make it funnier (or even better, go ahead and make some edits yourselves) that…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
So I’ve now got the actual tagging list from Jess. Apparently the one I’d found on a random recent topic wasn’t the right one and I ended up tagging some old guildlings and whoops, my bad. 😛
Anywho–great job to all those who’ve been putting effort into this! I’m going through and sorting through a lot of the comments at the moment, but it’s…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
Guys! You may have already noticed that @taylorclogston has arrived, but a warm welcome also to,
@Jade
@kaladinstormblessed
@taylorclogstonHope you all love it here at Parimi…[Read more]
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Emily D replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@julia @steward-of-the-pen. Okey dokey then. Did you want me to jump in and add them in during the next day or so?
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J.A.Penrose started the topic NaNoWriMo 2018 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Hello Parimis!
November is just around the corner, and with it, is NaNoWriMo! (National Novel Writing Month) I’m looking forward to participating again this year, and I know some of you will be as well!
For anyone who doesn’t know what this is, NaNoWriMo happens every November, and it’s where writers from all over the globe aim to write a…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@emily-d @julia @writercatherine @evelyn
Good job so far, guys! 😀 I went through and made an attempt at expanding the time travel scenes a bit. What do you think?
I also suggested changing the time travel method to his watch rather than him willing the wormholes to appear, because I think that it seems a bit too supernatural. I wouldn’t have a…[Read more]
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Emily D replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
I JUST HAD ANOTHER IDEA!!! This will expand the story AND make it funnier. WHAT IF Dave is terrible at interpreting Renaissance-speak and so he has a little recorder that translates everything da Vinci and Mona say into modern hip English?
Like:
“Either both our eyes play games with us both,” Mona Lisa snapped, “or thou art playing at some cruel…[Read more]
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Emily D replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@writercatherine I just read your post. What you said XD @julia @jane-maree @ariella-newheart @all-parimis
GO PARIMI ALCA!!!
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Emily D replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@julia @jane-maree @writercatherine I really liked it! But if we want to bump the word count up, maybe we should spend a bit longer in each time travelling scene? I feel like if we added more it would be a bit crazy! 🙂 But great job Julia!
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Absent for a Week in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
Hi Parimis!
I’ve returned, and thanks for being good for a week! (And awww, you’re all so nice! I had meant that I didn’t want you to all try and rebel against me and move permanently to Jane’s guild.)
And thanks again! @jane-maree
@wishingwell13
@cassie-hartfinh
@esjohnson
@coggleton
@julia
@evelyn
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@julia @evelyn Ooh, I like Settlers of Catan, Pandemic, and 7 Wonders, even though I don’t own them. I’ve only ever played them at my friend’s house. 😛 I also like playing Apples to Apples, Battleship, Trouble, cribbage, and pretty much any card game except hearts.
Also, welcome to Parimi Alca, @taylorclogston! Our land isn’t so strange. *looks…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
Awesome ideas! I love what @julia wrote on the doc! *claps*
And as usual, I had an idea too late, but I’ll put it here just in case. 😛
What if the lady who was being painted was like the princess in that one fairy tale who never smiled or laughed? And Da Vinci and some other characters keep trying to make her smile in all these absurd and goofy…[Read more]
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Jane Maree started the topic Lesson 18 : Set The Mood With Your Wording Choices in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 8 months ago
Hello all Parimis!
Apparently I got confused at some point and your guildmaster…has not returned yet (she’ll probably be back tomorrow), so I thought I’d whip up a quick lesson for this week in her stead. (Actually, I’m cheating and I’m reusing a lesson I’ve used in my own guild–Meraki–because it also fits with your theme of pacing and…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@julia No problem! Thanks for stepping up to write it!
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Catherine Roche replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
That works, too. And I’m so glad you volunteered to write it, @julia, because I have no time on my hands to do so. Maybe we could switch perspectives?
- The first perspective is the kid who goes back in time to see the painting being painted for a class, but accidentally sends it through time.
- The second is da Vinci’s perspective. He’s a…
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@julia Cool! Those are some good ideas for places to go.
Did you see the other two posts from @emily-d and me on the top of the second page? We were talking about doing the villain story, but I like the idea of an art loving kid. He could be a nervous, nerdy kid (that’s why he time travels), and his nerdy friends would make fun of him for liking…[Read more]
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Emily D replied to the topic Guild War 5 – The Mona Lisa Comedy in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Before we go further, what is a chorkney? I’m super curious! It sounds cool.
@evelyn @writercatherine @cassie-hartfinh @julia @all-other-Parimis
So, what is the less unique angle then? I still like the diary idea. And yeah, I’m not really sure about the humour aspect either, but hey, Steward, don’t you think that the m…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@julia No problem!
Duel is just the two person version of the game that you can buy.
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Evelyn replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
@julia Saaame!
Have you both versions of the game? Duel and normal? Or just one?
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