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SO PARIMIS, we only have two days left to complete the edits and polish the story. I think it has potential, but it needs to be spiced up a bit, especially the parts with Leonardo and Mona Lisa. If any of you could take a look at it and make suggestions about how we can make it funnier (or even better, go ahead and make some edits yourselves) that would be awesome! It would be especially helpful if one of you who hasn’t looked at it yet could read it and tell us your first impression, what parts you thought were funny, etc., since those of us who have been looking at it for a while will have a hard time gauging the humour.

Here’s the link to the doc again.

Thanks guys! This is a difficult prompt, so we’re going to need some good team effort on this. 🙂

@emily-d @writercatherine @julia @evelyn @cassie-hartfinh @esjohnson @ariella-newheart and everyone else.