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@emily-d @julia @writercatherine @evelyn

Good job so far, guys! 😀 I went through and made an attempt at expanding the time travel scenes a bit. What do you think?

I also suggested changing the time travel method to his watch rather than him willing the wormholes to appear, because I think that it seems a bit too supernatural. I wouldn’t have a problem with it if it was in an alternate universe, but since it’s not, I think it’s best to keep it more Sci-Fi by using the watch as a time travel device. It also makes for a consistent reason for him to mess up, because he’s clumsy with technology.

@emily-d I LOVE that idea! Maybe when he arrived back in Leonardo’s studio, he’d place it back on the easel while hearing footsteps in the hallway. Then he’d scramble into a hiding spot just in time for Mona Lisa to stalk in. Then da Vinci would appear, and he’d listen to their conversation and read the translations on his watch. Then when Mona Lisa storms out, Leonardo would shrug, pick up the painting, and leave. Then we could switch to the scene where Dave is back at the classroom with Robert.