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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Short Story: In a Mother’s Arms in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
AWWWW!! That was so sweet! The poem at the beginning was a very beautiful and nice touch. The mother/daughter relationship… Awww…
I believe it would be best punctuation wise to cut the comma, replace it with a period, then make the h in He lowercase. Like this: “I’ve got to go,” he said into the phone. (I bolded the c…[Read more]
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Inklingflame started the topic Short Story: In a Mother’s Arms in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
@mischievous-thwapling (🤞I Hope this works)
Hey Everybody!
I wrote this story for my Mother’s birthday. I would LOVE and critiques, criticisms, comments, or snide remarks (I know I messed up the alliteration;) you have. 😁 I have a poem introducing (for lack of a better word) my story, because…well why not! 😆 Anyway, here is the story:…[Read more] -
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Ari Austin replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
Your question made me laugh. Is it ever sensible? Probably not… Unless you are using it to woo someone. I think it’s sensible for a guy to use a bit of romance when proposing, otherwise, the girl might just say no. (depending on the girl I suppose) But in most cases, it’s probably likely to set your heart way ahead of your head. I guess, as I…[Read more]
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Zee replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
I have to say, the way you worded your post title question made me smile. Is romance ever…sensible?
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Ari Austin replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
I do pronounce it like from the Lord of the Rings! That’s actually who my parents named me after. 🙂
Baby naming books are full of weird things. They are helpful for finding normal names that my brain won’t come up with alone though.
I am not smart enough to create my own names. I mostly write in the “present-day America”, so I…[Read more]
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Zee replied to the topic Hangs head, “Sorry, maybe this isn’t a romance.” in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
Well, good luck, then. Romance or not, I’m sure it will be a good story either way.
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Laur_M replied to the topic Hangs head, “Sorry, maybe this isn’t a romance.” in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
@zee Since I wrote the above blather I have circled back around to being a romance again. (Actually, I tried to delete the previous post. You weren’t supposed to see it. It was resurrected somehow. There’s a story for ya, the discussion post that wouldn’t stay dead. Zombie Post)
Saturday I drove to the town in which my story is set, hung a…[Read more]
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Zee replied to the topic Hangs head, “Sorry, maybe this isn’t a romance.” in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
@laur_m, sounds to me like you’re not moving around in circles, but in the right direction! I had a similar issue with the first novel I tried to write (which ended up being scrapped for parts) I wanted it to be an adventure story, but it ended up a romance. Sometimes, a story can go a lot of ways, but there’s often only one best way, and it’s…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@amaustin Oh, I love your name!😍 Do you pronounce it like Arwen Evenstar from Lord of the Rings?
Baby books can be great…but sometimes they have weird meanings for great names. Do you ever make up meanings for names you invented? I want to sometime.
I usually say my name Air-n-down, but I’m not picky (actually, I say it Are-in-down half the…[Read more]
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Sarahfi replied to the topic Convention Tips? in the forum Publishing and Marketing Nerds 5 years, 6 months ago
They are offering some interactive events, mainly zoom meetups I think.
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Ari Austin replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, developing the plot is always a good idea… just not as fun as romance. :] If I ever finish the third draft that I’m working on of my book (somehow no one told me that books take so much work when I started. Although, I didn’t exactly know anyone who wrote when I started, nor did I tell anyone when I started, it just kind of…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey, I like your plot. Sounds like something I would like reading.😊 I would say spending time to develop the plot and characters would be a great idea, whether or not it’s a total romance. The deeper the characters, the better the relationships will be.
I hope this isn’t too personal, but is your name actually Ari? I LOVE that name.😍…[Read more]
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Ari Austin replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
I would love to look at your NaNoWriMo! I’m sure it will be amazing!
I think some Christians do have different standards, but I guess for me, I wouldn’t even have them kiss before marriage. That’s just personal though, I think it really does depend on the person and what they are comfortable with. Only up to a point though, because the…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
I think it is possible to insinuate too much. When I’m afraid of crossing a “line” and being inappropriate or insinuating, I question whether I would let my parents (they’re always helpful when you’ve gone too far) or one of my younger sisters read it. If not, maybe I need to adjust something.
I love the idea of having the main romance…[Read more]
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I haven’t read the Scarlet Pimpernel, although I should because I’d love to read someone “sticking it to” the French Revolution. I remember the Scarlet Pimpernel was mentioned in the Larry Norman song “Without Love (You Ain’t Nothin’)”. Yeah, I’m that old. My future spouse and I actually went to a Larry Norman concert back in the day.
My…[Read more]
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Laur_M replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
I think I shall need to invite you two to have a look at my NaNoWriMo project, or the romantic pieces of it at least, when I get far enough.
My MC, as all MCs must, has a big lesson to learn, and part of the lesson involves how she approaches romance. She is a Christian but, like all Christians, she is a work in progress. She falls, she gets up…[Read more]
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Ari Austin replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
That makes a lot of sense. Most of the people in the Bible are certainly not what I would refer to as romantics (not sure about Solomon. Maybe he’s a romantic, but not a great one) but you do make the excellent point that there is at least something to build on.
I, personally, don’t have my characters that start out Christian go any further than…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic How sensible and biblical is romance? in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
I think the Bible leaves a lot of room for romance…within certain boundaries. I wouldn’t base my romances off many biblical characters for obvious reasons (David, Abraham, Esther, etc.), but I think there are some examples, in the Bible, of what Biblical romance is. Ruth and Boaz are the best example, I believe, but there’s…[Read more]
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Thanks! I’ve never liked/been good at grammar:) It’s going to be the death of me someday! I definitely need grammar help 😂 I usually don’t get upset when I get critiques, so no worries here. I’d rather you say something then keep it to yourself anyway;)
Same here!!
Yay, I’m so glad! Thank you SO much for letting me read it! It was wonderful.